character: my first character

[spineless]

Hey its looking good:thumbsup:
He might look a bit skinny compared how "wellbuilt" he is. If he would be so skinny I dont suppose he would look so muscular.
Otherwise good work, especially on the hands and lower arms. Keep it up

[Eskay]

LOL he has that "who me?" look. Nice first model. :D

[Emberghost]

Thats very nice! It has a lot of good detail in the hands and other body parts. The only thing that doesnt really seem right is the material on the jeans.

[Michael Chen]

First post :beer:

I like the overall figure, but it just seems like that person got something stuck in his mouth. His mouth just doesn't seem to be in a natural position. Hope you know what I mean.

[velinje]

The chest muscular, feels somewhat strange. Cheekbones are a bit to exaggerated and the textures of the clothing needs some work.. and maybe the skin, feels a bit plastic? But good work!, neat.. Love to see an update.

[suttercane]

awesome first char

looks like demo reel quality to me.

what soft? and method?

[deddy]

hi all,
thank you for your reply and the comment,
i might fix those problems that you guys mention later on
because im on my school project and i need to do 2 others monster ....

btw, the software i use is maya... and about the method, what you mean by 'method' ?


anyway, thank you guys alot ..... i'll keep it in mind

[Sensei]

The jeans (especially) and shirt are too "perfect"... You should make some folds on them! I would also add pockets and slit to these jeans.

Anyway, not bad start.

I would like to see him moving!

[sam-originality]

very cool:beer:

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