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gaiasgrace
06-20-2008, 11:21 AM
Hello!

I'm currently employed as a general 3D Artist/Animator for a Fruit Machine company and I'm looking to get into the Computer Games industry purely as an animator/character animator.

My showreel:

http://myspacetv.com/index.cfm?fuseaction=vids.individual&videoid=36584566

This Showreel isn't finished as I want to cut it down to about a minute and a half (currently 2:18).

So the best way you can help me is to let me know which bits need to be taken out. Or parts of the longer sequences that need to be edited out.

Other that that any other crits are welcome as I'm sure you will all rip it apart :-)

All the modelling is me except for the UT3 model at the end which I will mention on the final reel.

Thanks.

-Nick

gaiasgrace
06-21-2008, 12:00 PM
Sorry. Don't think the previous link works unless you are signed into Myspace.

You can view it at the top of my page here:

http://www.myspace.com/nickgunnanimation

Thanks.

acamporota
06-21-2008, 01:39 PM
hi man..re ally nice work..if i can give you some little tips..
i suggest you to work more on timing in your animation..
because right know the timing is pretty even..
look the second shot (biped) the rhytm of the animation is always the same and really slow...
try to change the rhytm (fast-slow) to make the shot more intresting
i hope this can help you man

see ya

gaiasgrace
06-23-2008, 08:07 AM
Thanks for the reply!
Will take that into consideration.

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