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polyoptix
06-18-2008, 08:25 PM
Hi there,

I have almost finished a new demo piece and was hoping to get a little feed back on it before I render and put the final on my reel for Siggraph.

I think i am a bit torn between trying to make it realistic or cartoony...I think its done, but is it not snappy enough? http://forums.awn.com/images/smilies/confused.gif

Any advice?

**WARNING: rough language, rap lyrics. ( I hope that its ok to post, srry otherwise!! )

http://www.polyoptics.ca/MonsterRap.mov
(6.6mb Quicktime)

The music is by Slum Village.

Here is a still from the animation:
http://www.polyoptics.ca/monsterRapsStill.jpg

Here is what he looks like rendered, from an old project:
http://www.polyoptics.ca/SS.778.jpg

Thanks,
Brian

FaQ3D
06-19-2008, 09:07 PM
Staging, upper body and facial animation is nice. The only thing you should take care is the lower body, make it move like the rap singers do! make it walk from one side of the stage to the other. Right now its nailed right there, no pelvis or legs movement...

Keep it up!

polyoptix
06-19-2008, 09:17 PM
Glad you like it!

Actually he is sitting in a chair, I guess that doesnt come across too well eh? :banghead:

FaQ3D
06-19-2008, 09:36 PM
well then you should make him stand up! no rap singer sings sitting on a chair!!

polyoptix
06-19-2008, 10:01 PM
Maybe if i turn it into more of a throne or something?.. hmmm

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