Wolverine vs Deathstrike

[gmask]

Hey.. that's pretty good.. although it's not really a versus unless they are fighting one another.

[Agent D]

It does look good. And it is a versus, because Deathstrike is dodging Wolverine's attack! :p

[KolbyJukes]

Yeah, it looks like Deathstrike is dodging Wolvie.

Nice pic, the lines could be cleaner though.

-Kol.

[9th Legion]

Hey, amazing. You've got a real sense of anime style. I like the dynamics & motion there

cheers

[gmask]

Originally posted by Agent D
It does look good. And it is a versus, because Deathstrike is dodging Wolverine's attack! :p

Then why are they wearing the same uniform??

[9th Legion]

The fact that they're both wearing black, doesn't mean they are on the same team.:shame:

cheers

[sound effect]

yeah, how come in the movie x-men thry have a standard black uniform, they should of stuck with the comic and gave them thier individual ware... :annoyed:

[gmask]

Originally posted by sound effect
yeah, how come in the movie x-men thry have a standard black uniform, they should of stuck with the comic and gave them thier individual ware... :annoyed:

I think that in the past too many movies that have tried that looked silly.. Persoanlly I think they look alot more beleiveable.. you have to be super human to run around in brightly color spandex and not stick out like a sore thumb.

I will say that Spiderman was somewhat successful in not looking like spandex or somethign else equally cheesy.

[Merlin]

Looks good, but it gets really funky, where their legs collide, Wolvie's right leg, DeathStrike's left. I'm having to stare at it to figure who's leg is which. Try altering the color's of their suits so that they're not so similar. There's many different shades of black you can use, as well as diffusion/specularity of the materials.

Neal

[gmask]

Originally posted by Merlin
Looks good, but it gets really funky, where their legs collide, Wolvie's right leg, DeathStrike's left. I'm having to stare at it to figure who's leg is which.

Since theya re apparently having a battle maybe she cut off his other leg.

BTW why do they both have no pupils??

[KolbyJukes]

Gmask...why all the interest in this thread?

[Pinky_Powers]

Originally posted by gmask
Since theya re apparently having a battle maybe she cut off his other leg.

BTW why do they both have no pupils??

I have read enough comics so that them not having pupils really didn't throw me off untill you said something. lol

I really like this image man, but I agree with some of the stuff said here, the lines you drew are pretty slopy on the characters, you should try and sharpen them up, it looks like you dew even the outlines using a WaCom, and that is almost always a bad idea, for you just cannot get the same effect as you can drawing with Pencil.

Also, the legs do get lost in eachother, you may want to change that.

And I personaly would have liked to see the backgound colored with more than one color, but that is just a personal opinion, nothing more.

good work.

[MaTibay520]

Thx for your comments. I am a penciler, and my inking skills suck. Also, I'm not a colorist. I did do that for my wallpaper and I enjoyed the process. I am taking everyone's crit's to heart and using them to better my own pencils for work and submissions. Please, continue to crit this peace and others I put forward

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