Character:Female Head

[flingster]

nice job...skin is cool.
:thumbsup:

[noen]

whats up with her ear??

[Rodi]

She's got that facial expression where she has seen a 9"
:applause:

But seriously she is a nice model, but i think the uvw texture needs some more work...and some hair would be b nice..i like the jumper

[ndat]

I dont have much time to write this, so Ill just say your model looks very nice... But I agree something is lacking in the texture, I think it needs more of a bump map to it... There might already be one, but if there is it needs to have more impact. Good job and good luck :)

[leigh]

Ummm... personally I think that this still needs a lot of work :)

The shape of the head is really unnatural - especially parts like the nose, and that tiny ear :surprised
The lips also look really weird - like she's had implants.

The overall shape of the head also looks like it is incorrect, athough it might only be this angle. But to me it looks like the entire side and back of the head are incorrectly shaped.

The texture also needs a lot of work, as it looks very much like a rushed job (sorry if it isn't). As has been mentioned, it needs more of a bump to it to give the skin more texture. The actual colour of the skin is a little strange (looks like you just randomly placed blotches of colour all over the model, instead of carefully placing the different tones), and overall it's a bit plasticky.

The eyes look a little reflective, and the eyelashes don't look like they have any antialiasing.

The eyebrows look like you painted them very hastily - take a little more time and effort with your work, and you will get much better results.

[KingMob]

hey its a good start so far...something is off about the head...it may just be the fact she has no hair or the expression but something feels insane about her...

Also the top of her head seems a bit thin.. and the ear needs work...looks like a banana or something.

But with just a bit mroe work I think this can be something real nice, just gotta flesh out a few more areas a bit more.

[JIII]

that ear is just kinda stapled on. but it does have potential.

nice work so far.

[Katachi]

Hi all of you,

thanks for your comments.

@ndat: Thanks, I will try to remember getting a better bump map.

@Leigh: The shape of the head is unnatural...hmmm...I guess it´s alright but I am not the perfect artist so it might be :) Here is a picture from the side.

http://www.3ddesigner.net/artwork/female_side.jpg

(yes, I know the back of the head is not textured correctly and even has a seem...but it´s not visisble so why texturing it :)

Actually I did it after a very nice tutorial that was available here on CGTalk and was front page. It cannot be THAT bad ;) But yes, the bump and the plastic look...might really be. Thanks, will remember this for the next picture...(cannot really agree on the tones but will have a second look :)

Oh yeah, the eyelashes and the eyes...ok will change that. Thank you!!!

With the eyebrows.. Yes you are right. Just painted them very hashily.:D (Got a job yesterday that has priority so I didn´t have the time to finish it...)

@Kingmob: Thanks, I will try to improve my ears on my next model.

Thanks for all your comments, they are very helpful!!!

Best
Samir

[Katachi]

She somehow looks much better from the side I just noticed :hmm:

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