Lightbot

[Angroc]

Interesting concept indeed, but I just think the execution was a tad bit off.

First of all, the timing was a little bit off; or atleast a bit confusing. Also, the fade-in with th music doesnt work, imo. Secondly, I didnt quite "catch" the bit where the lightbot stops the chord on the end there. You should reconsider the clipping of that part if I where. Secondly, I would recomend some sort of intro with a title and all that stuff. maybe an end as well. Thirdly, it starts a tad too sudden, generally, I think the clipping is a bit... hasty; its not that I dont understand whats going on, its just that I cant get a "feeling" of.

I think its a brilliant concept, but think you should reconsider some of the clipping, retime the sound design and add a title screen of some sort.

[cbaristo]

maybe the transformation is a bit odd, but i love it... i really do.
great work!

[Glacierise]

I loved the design and animation too, nice one man!

[Neon67]

hi , thanks for your comment
So for the timming , not the anim it's self but camera cut and story:

Normally my story should have been almost 1 mn long , with smooth intro and an extended end.
But the problem was that i had to render absolutly 30 sec , so i had to cut as short as i could and keep enssential.
For the transformortation i know it's really speed, it's cause i didn't want to loose too much time of the 30 sec on it , i just wanna tried to animate as a character

[cbaristo]

i totally agree about the fast transformation, timming is just cool!!! what i see wrong is something with physics and gravity. it goes up in a linear way, transformates itself allmost in the same position and then goes down linearly again. It should be more parabolic for me.

but still loving it! : )
sound rocks too but get rid of the music!

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