Character: Gerald: Image 2

[mage111]

thats alot better then your first one :O!
i like it alot more :D

great work man

BTW - its the expression that changes everything for me :-)

[JonasNoell]

This is really an amazing artwork, the realism of the mouth, tongue and teeth just blow my mind. It's definitely improving. The greenish background in my opinion didn't fit too well to the model, it made the whole thing look somehow build up quickely together. Only crit is for me (still) the shirt, but you already know my opinion about it ;)

:thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup:

Nonetheless VERY inspiring, impressing, and simply great.

cANt

[Daniel]

very good!!!

The teeth are new? :surprised They look like from a comercial.
"I use Pearl White, coz I like white teeth". Well, the aren't that white like in the comercial, but the look very perfect ;)

Cya.

[proton]

Lovethe expression.....show us more!

[SimonReeves]

very nice update :thumbsup:

the slight shine on the face looks great

[Joebount]

Way better !
Just a few things to tweak : the specular map is way to uniform, it looks like you have the same amount of sebum all over his face (nose and forehand are more reflective since they dispend a bigger amount of sebum than the other part of your face). The texure needs also to be tweaked on the lips (diffuse and bump channel. The eye corner's wrinkles shouldn't be so sharp. Try to add more depth and details to the one under his eye (you know this region that get flat if you don't sleep enough, just under your eye, damn french, cannot get the word). The tongue looks more like a cow's one than a human's one (looking from the size of the bump and its aspect). The teeth are really too perfect. You need to improve a lot the expression going through his eye (tips : aim them to the same point, he won't have this lost apearence anymore ;). One last thing : the V shape of the mouth is looks a bit strange (well, maybe just for me), not false, but strange !

Anyway, better ! Don't give up ! :thumbsup:

[ostov]

WOW!! That is dam nice man. The tounge does not look like a tounge:surprised



ostov

[Blackarts]

This is technically well done, but the skin is maybe a tad greasy?

Other than that I have a strange urge to punch this guy in the face.

[Theta-Dot]

Originally posted by Blackarts

Other than that I have a strange urge to punch this guy in the face.
^^ HAHA :) thank you for saying that, it made my day

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Anyway, it really is amazing. I have a model I want to texture... but I really don't know how. HOW DID YOU DO IT!?! I would love to know. It looks very amazing. Stunningly good. And how did you do the hair??? Please tell us your secrets!

Ok only crits I have is that I think you could find a better map for the eyes. A more high res / sharper map to increase the realism. I also think the nose is too flat on the bottom.. but if that's how you want it that's ok. Oh one more thing, I think he looks a little bit too shiny also..

Great job again,

=ThetaDot=

[l-a-akira]

I made some minor changes to this pic...also a simple composite

http://room201.net/gsmilenbg2.jpg

http://www.room201.net/gsmilecomp.jpg

[BiTMAP]

would expect the inside of the mouth to be darker, other then that :) its nice. Accept perhaps not wet enough in the mouth...

[proton]

This is looking like a killer gallery image....send it in!:bounce:

[blasphemy3_d]

Great model Akira.

Please post more expression samples :thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup:

[Takara]

that kicks ass!!! :bounce:
i really love his skin, not this perfect flawless cg skin, but some reallife unclean skin with pimples! his teeth are a bit too plain, give em a bit more structure, right now they look like the thirds of my granny. And the tongue is a bit too bumpy, the stucture is too rough (big) (i am not talking about the bump). And the shirt is a bit too smooth/unstructred, a little bump would help. Hm, i hope it makes sense what i am saying, maybe i should add a picture of my tongue :scream:

[l-a-akira]

Thanks again for all the C&Cs guys. I was originally planning to make an image for each expression but it looks like i'm just gonna move onto something else completely. Heres a link to some of the other expressions untextured.

http://www.cgtalk.com/showthread.php?s=&threadid=56946&highlight=gerald

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