CGTalk - 1st Post : Apples

VelvetDragon

05-22-2003, 02:33 PM

Hi everybody !

This is the first image I post on this site. It s just a WIP as you will see. That s a composition I made with Maya for my first steps with this software(I started 3 weeks ago).

I would really appreciate your comments and critics :)

;)

Thx all !

VelvetDragon

05-23-2003, 10:29 AM

I see there s no reply to my post since yesterday... Is my pic so bad ?

Please, I need some advice to make this scene look better than now...

:)

See you! :wavey:

VelvetDragon

05-26-2003, 01:43 PM

Heeeeeelp !!!

I know there s something wrong with this pic but I cant say what... :shrug:
So it is really difficult for me to go further in the composition of the scene.

Is there any user here that can post any suggestion ?:lightbulb

Just need some comment to make the scene better.

:)

Carina

05-26-2003, 03:34 PM

It's not bad so far..

I think the yellow highlights are too.... yellow.. Doesn't look very natural.. Try to put some natural lights and possibly a more interesting composition. If you want to keep a yellowish light I would choose a different colour of the table cloth.. I think it clashes a bit at the moment.

VelvetDragon

05-26-2003, 04:07 PM

Thanks a lot since you re the first and only at the moment that have posted a reply to my thread :bouncy:

Your comments are really helpful to me. I'll go work on the scene and make it more natural. Maybe a new picture post this evening :)

Thx again!!!

PS: Nice avatar! :p :thumbsup: :D

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