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shorai
06-13-2008, 10:20 AM
Hey Community, i've created my second little demoreel.
I'm more a rookie than a pro but i want to show it to you to get some advises for enhancing my work. So here it is .
http://de.youtube.com/watch?v=s9jgBkIrVoE

If you want to see my old 07 reel klick here (http://de.youtube.com/watch?v=3MDb011eBaY)

And if you like to see my latest short just visit this thread (http://forums.cgsociety.org/showthread.php?f=154&t=639288)

So thx alot and i hope u'll like them a bit.

cheers
shorai
06-19-2008, 08:12 AM
Would be glad if somebody could give a tip cause i'm thinking that there are many thinks that i could dpo a better way but i don't really know what is tha main"problem"

thx alot
ChrisSosa
06-19-2008, 03:54 PM
Your rendering and modeling is good but the animation needs work. Also for your models you might want to stick with a turntable reel. Check out other modeling reels and you'll see what I mean. I think there's a feature in Maya now that automate it for you.
shorai
06-23-2008, 08:50 AM
ok thx alot ..thats the kind of good crit i could use =)

i do my stuff with 3dmax but i think u've meant the 360° cameramovement around the character ?! I will use it in my next reel!
Pooyag
06-23-2008, 10:34 AM
Hi Benjamin,

I've been having demo reel classes lately and hopefully i could give you a few tips.

your demo is too long for the materials you've put in...
we're always reminded to Just put the best works....only the best! quality over quantity.
you need to make sure the person who watches your demo stays in for more than 10sec through it; I'm not sure you're very successful with that.

even though the beginning looks cool and all but it's a bit long...it's 10sec; cut it half at least.
work on your animations.
and yes, just stick with turntable for your models.
i don't get the last piece :rolleyes:

hopefully i've been helpful; good luck!
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