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[cerialKiller]

Hi, this is my third post here - and I never posted any artwork ;) - so I will be calm. ;)

First thing: The texturing on that chair is really amazing. A good way to enhance the scenery will be to place a nice lamp next to it that serves as the main light source illuminating the chair (and the character when you've added it) and leaving the rest of a room in the dark. You may reveal it in a later point in time (in an animation or picture-series.)

[zeromancer1972]

absolutely no crits, exept the texture of the carpet. it hit my eyes in the first seconds i saw this image: it is too big - or even try to get the carpet thicker than that.

but nevertheless: good job so far :beer:

[cerialKiller]

Maybe change the carpet texture to something completely different: I'm thinking of a red orientalic design.

[ovendelon]

sorry for my english first :(

cerialKiller: 10x, I'm thinking about a lamp, but now I must focus on the character so aditional props would be added later :)
orieantal type of carpet is really good idea 10x :)

zeromancer1972: 10x, I'll try making the carpet thicker and will fix the UV problem on the right.

[tumbi]

wery good work man!!!! :beer:

[TheFreak]

it looks good, and if you sort out the issue with the rug it will look even better.

My only crit is with the sitting area of the seat. It looks very square and hard. If this seat is as old as it looks then the cushion would be probably a bit more curved at the front where it has streached from the pressure of people sitting on it. and the middle of the cushion might be sunk in a little more.
At the moment it looks more like a wooden seat than a nice soft cushion covered in leather.

Just an idea :)

but looking good, nice render and i agree with the lamp when you get the time to add it.

:applause: :applause:

[ovendelon]

well an update, started modeling clothes (may sound stupid, but it's the truth)

[ovendelon]

TheFreak: 10x, I know about the sitting area, but I'll see what part of it will be visible when the char sits in it and will make it more curved :) 10x again

[coCoKNIght]

lol

It's looking really cool! Hey! what's that on the background? blood? The wall texture looks too procedural I think, and the carpet could be a little less square :) otherwise It's photorealistic :thumbsup:

[cbutlerc]

I like the image alot, very moody.

The only crit I have is the chair, something just looks out of place to me.
I agree that the chair looks a little stiff and square, besides that it looks to me like a leather chair correct.
If it is leather it should have alot of cracks and creases, especially in the corners and such where the fabric would be folded together.

It is looking fantastic so far :bounce:

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