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milkweed
06-08-2008, 10:54 PM
i quick drawing i did, to make fun of officers in the Army....i'll probably hav to do push-ups for this so i want it it to be good...any critiques would help..thanks
http://i111.photobucket.com/albums/n150/nafegar/officer.jpg

ninkan
06-09-2008, 01:36 PM
hey...

u need to work on the body proportions.There's a big hunch on the back, the abdomen and the thorax are not proportionate..also he needs a neck i guess.

hope to see an update soon.

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