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Bittler
06-03-2008, 09:59 AM
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Title: The Hell Troopers
Name: Bittler Bernard
Country: France
Software: Photoshop

Hi, My last work . I continue the exploration of differents worlds or landscapes. I don't know if it's the same planet...earth or paralel univers... I used Photoshop and personal shoot of a roof i a great supermarket in Paris "Les Galeries Lafayette"
Your crits are welcome
Bernard
memod
06-04-2008, 12:29 AM
Hello Bernard, I think you have a cool image there, some nice contrast going on and lots of details. What I miss, though, is a really clear focus. When I look at your image I am not sure where to look first, and what the really most important element is.
I suppose it is the ship, but then again the woman might be equally important? What might help is some small additional lights perhaps, either directly on the ship or which cast light onto it, so that you can show it off some more. For a hero element I just find it a little too subtle :D
Otherwise I really like this, it has an interesting atmosphere, and the complex structures are fun to explore. I'd probably add some more shine and gloss here and there, but yeah, good work!

Daniel
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