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eyesonlybob 06-03-2008, 02:04 AM http://features.cgsociety.org/gallerycrits/283228/283228_1212458666_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/gallerycrits/283228/283228_1212458666_large.jpg)
Title: Kyle
Name: Kyle Webb
Country: USA
Software: Maya, mental ray, Photoshop
Most expressive character I have created thus far. Also explores fur and nCloth.
Created and rendered with Maya and Mental Ray.
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White Rabbit
06-04-2008, 09:01 AM
Hey Kyle,
Some good some bad I'd say - the character does look expressive and the clothes seem to work nicely, but I think you might want to look more closely into your posing:
In the first pose, he seems very unbalanced leaning forward like that. Try Putting one of his feet forward so that his center of gravity is between his feet. Also, it might be nice to close the fingers of his left hand around his knee, I think it'd look more natural. Something's awkward with the lower part of his back in that pose too.
The other two work way better though I think :)
Keep it up!
eyesonlybob
06-04-2008, 04:27 PM
Thanks for the comment. I have to admit that I rushed the poses. So, I completely agree with your comments. I probably should have fixed those before submiting the final but, hey, I was excited =)
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