Character: Cartoon Largemouth Bass

[secretasianman]

no offense but i don't like how the eye look like they are just sitting there.

the frot pic is not so bad, but when you turn him, eh it doesn't look right.
maybe becasue you have no lids to the eyes.:shrug:

[Remi]

Ahh...thanks....no offense taken....I forgot about that....I shouldn't have posted...i'm adding eyelids now...thanks:thumbsup:

[JonC]

yes, eyelids would be great :)
but otherwise it's nicely done!
i'd say there is maybe a little texture problem? it seems that the textures isn't in a high definition on the side view, seems to be pixeled, comparare to the rest.

I would really enjoy to see some facial expression on this!!!

[Remi]

yea...I used the mosaic filter in PS for that black line down the side of him...I could take that off if you think that would be better too. thanks for the feedback:)

[betelgeuse]

Hey Remi, I think this can be a really neat character. I agree with the others, and it looks like you've put some nostril holes above the upper lip? Not sure that works for a fish.....:thumbsup:

[Remi]

Thanks for the comments betelgeuse....I think he needs eyelids too.....as for the nostrils...I guess I was just trying to go for a humanistic type of deal here....same with the lips...just in case he needs to talk I don't know....remember he's just a cartoon...thanks for the comments...keep em' coming:D

[I animate]

I really like this fish. One thing that I noticed, in the front view it looks like the texture is being stretched across the forehead.

I know, fish have no forehead but you get what I mean.

Cool fish!

:bounce: :bounce: :bounce: :bounce: :bounce:

[Flog]

Remi ol buddy ol pal
How is life?
Long time no read!!

Great texture on the fish, although I could see him being a little fatter, oh crap, I don't know, you and both know your the king and great at this 3d game

Hope everything is going good:banghead:

[betelgeuse]

I guess I was just trying to go for a humanistic type of deal here...

OK. But if you keep the nostrils, I might suggest that you make them clearly evident. Right now they look a little tentative as if you're not sure he should have them.

[FallenSwordsman]

Great looking bit of fish there Remi....I'm going to refrain from telling you to make him sing....you've probably had enough of that already! Looks good though. Nice texturing job:beer:

[Remi]

Here's the trophy....gave him some eyelids and I think it helped....thanks for the comments everyone...I really appreciate them.:thumbsup:

http://www.firedragon.com/~lwg3d/GD/2003/05/21-564523.jpg

[webfox]

Does he crack jokes when you walk by?

:D

He's come along really well. Can't wait to see what you do with him if you decide to animate.

[JonasNoell]

Nice and funny model.

Problem: The eyes are pointing in the wrong direction. Fishes eyes are pointing more to the side than to the front. Furthermore the eyes need to be much more in the interior of the head.

[Remi]

He's a cartoon...he's supposed to have human characteristics.....but thanks for the comments:D

[Beechdbum]

ha ha ha this guys great,you did a wonderful job texuring him
i think allot of people didnt read cartoon in the title i guess its the year of the photorealistic or something

[Remi]

Thanks for the comments...updated the image on the first page...just gave the base a wood texture...hope you like:)

[samartin]

Looking sweet Remi, considering it started out with a few ales inside of ya :thumbsup:

Must try alchohol mixed with LW...

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