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djbailey
06-01-2008, 11:51 PM
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SFedor
06-03-2008, 06:31 AM
I think i see what you're going for, but you may want to tweak the composition a bit to make the piece more cohesive while still representing the clash of elements. The flowers look to plopped on and out of place, which sure clashes, but throws the overall picture off. Try to fit them into the scene more, maybe have them grow out of the wires or something. The elements need to relate somehow in order to show their dichotomy IMO.

Design wise, the simple color pallet is very nice and I like your use of white space a lot. Best of Luck!

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