Character: Slowly Death

[finchiswaiting]

:airguitar duh duh duh duhn duh awesome man , what did you make it in???

[Pablo-PL]

Finchiswaiting- i don't understand what u mean...plaese clearly:)))

[DeViSoR]

Uhmm can't se the image.

[dominicqwek]

yep same here. cant see anything.

[Pablo-PL]

sory but i have problems with server...tomorow will by see:))

[Pablo-PL]

any sugestions??? ist too bad?:((((

gretz

[danne82]

greetings from www.eeye.us I think it rocks :buttrock:
however some things just seem to vanish, take that those things that are on his arm it just goes through him, maybe make some sort of flesh around it, looks like a statue almost! Great work anyway!! Keep it up

/Raden from eeye.us

[HawVer]

Nice shader and atmospheric! :wip:

[Pablo-PL]

thanks :))) this is my first model .... in next cahracter will be better :)))

gretz

[IDownupI]

nice

[Konstruct]

I like the style and the idea-
but-
the texture, bump map looks weird. like a statue ( i think someone already said that)
abs are too flat
face is too square around the jaw
the transition between the torso and the slime could be smoother
the neck is really messed up
and thats as far as I can go for now, consider this model done and move forward
http://64.246.38.49/artbyfeng/creatures/crea_15.jpg
I don`t think your looking closely enough at this drawing. your looking at an arm and thinking. " ok its an arm", so you make an arm. what you should do next time, is look at what make that arm, look special, where it needs to conncect, the way its shaped, the way it would move etc.


next time you model a human body structure, look at an anatomy book, it helps alot!!!
oh and look at taking a life drawing class. the ones where you draw naked people for hours at a time. those REALLY help.

[Pablo-PL]

Konstrukt- thanks for helping comment :))...right now i modeling my new charachter but i don't have any drawings...only in my mind ::)))

gretz

[raden]

your first model?

goodjob!

i like the shader & lighting setup.
would be better if you can make it looks more fleshy on the top.


goodluck on your next model, sure would be better :)




@danne82
my first name is your last name :beer:

[L0kki]

heya pablo good job i just love that freaky-cool shader your first model wow:bounce: really great render m8

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