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JasonChoi
05-19-2003, 06:12 PM
:)


http://myhome.thrunet.com/~reboom/laputa03.jpg

HDTV size.

I have a rework, I had adjust for my picture.

See you,


P.S // 3D clouds volumetric shader.

http://myhome.thrunet.com/~reboom/clouds.jpg
http://myhome.thrunet.com/~reboom/clouds02.jpg

slice56
05-19-2003, 07:55 PM
man, no replies? wow

i think the colors are nice, but the image is a tad confusing. there is a TON of stuff going on, and its hard to make it all out in a still. if it was moving, i think it would be very nice. good work :D

JasonChoi
05-19-2003, 08:00 PM
:)

I guess it is not completely 90%?
Just a little bit more clearly adjust for compositing.


Anyway Thank you,

phoenix2k
05-19-2003, 09:10 PM
thats nice! :)... i really like the lighting effects

but 1 crit: the window sizes seem all messed up :), i've seen the image before somewhere and so has already said this so i'm just repeating, but i think you should correct it to get an even better image :)

that damn kid
05-19-2003, 09:17 PM
yeah...its a little too confusing....maybe simplify the buildings a little...and by that i mean...the wierd patterns on them..but all together good work:thumbsup:

JasonChoi
05-19-2003, 09:28 PM
:)

Thank you everyone.

I 'm adjust pattern a few more. But, I don't know how can
I progress continue....:rolleyes:

Dezzo
05-20-2003, 12:01 AM
great pic! :beer:

could use some feeling of depth around the lower half of the city....

fantastic world u created....wish i could do something like that :(

Kev3D
05-20-2003, 01:22 AM
wow!

I don't have any crits about that, it's excellent!

JasonChoi
05-20-2003, 02:19 AM
:)

Nice meet you, Morlankey.

I would like to see you more good pics at next time.
I try to preparing to other stuff. If i finish it I will show you.
Have a good day,

See you,

Emberghost
05-20-2003, 04:33 AM
Very nice looking but I agree your lighting is so complex it is hard to tell some of the detail on the buildings.

derelict
05-20-2003, 04:58 AM
messy

JasonChoi
05-21-2003, 02:37 AM
:)

^^;;;

confusing?

derelict
05-21-2003, 04:31 AM
yes it still is my friend. because of the monotone effect you place on the final render

dimitrios_c
05-21-2003, 08:17 AM
I really like the composition. I feel like I'm falling... :bounce:

Beavis
05-21-2003, 11:30 AM
like the style but it has a confusing composition.

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