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dim5um

05-19-2003, 05:59 PM

hi guys, hope some of you could help me out in pointing out my mistake. Particularly to the style i have used. ex:

1]Is the art too sketchY? yes, no?
2]Is the color sense too dull? yes, no?

if yes, could you guys gimme some tips on what you guys feel would work better? thanks for advance. Would really appreciate it.

[more pages can be found on my site...actually not alot yet]

---nic
www14.brinkster.com/bluediary

mattregnier

05-19-2003, 06:52 PM

hey i took five to check out your site, the biggest problem to me is you need overlapping panels for your layout. check out how the artists at image/marvel/dc do it. it makes your page more dynamic. Now the story has problems flowing because you have every frame outlined. hope this helps...

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