Classic Bathroom, Soroosh Ghaffarian (3D)

[kiboSVK]

I like colours and wood behind window nice job I like it. Keep it

[MaryamNademi]

Hi Soroosh,
There are some certain points I would change in this,
the background looks like a frame.it should be blurry, for now you cant feel the depth.
i would change the aspect ratio of the image, like to be a vertical frame 0.75 might work.then you wont cut the window as its a high ceiling bathroom and a positive fact in the design.
becarefull of the colors you choose for a bathroom.you may need to see some magazines.
if you want to see how light will work correctly check:
http://features-temp.cgsociety.org/gallerycrits/49608/49608_1147163762_large.jpg

I hope you dont mind:thumbsup: and i will look forward to see more from you.

[soroosh]

Thanks kiboSVK .

Hi Soroosh,
There are some certain points I would change in this,
the background looks like a frame.it should be blurry, for now you cant feel the depth.
i would change the aspect ratio of the image, like to be a vertical frame 0.75 might work.then you wont cut the window as its a high ceiling bathroom and a positive fact in the design.
becarefull of the colors you choose for a bathroom.you may need to see some magazines.
if you want to see how light will work correctly check:
http://features-temp.cgsociety.org/gallerycrits/49608/49608_1147163762_large.jpg

I hope you dont mind:thumbsup: and i will look forward to see more from you.

Very thanks Maryam .
very good and useful point .
I wiil change this work and show this topic .
mamnoon.
Best regards .

[soroosh]

Hi all .
Update of This Project .
http://www.adonisstudio.com/graphicplanet/bathroomfinalcg2.jpg

[LouisCho]

in the first image, the background didn't fit because there is no horizon line. I see the forest from higher, check your vanishing lines. The seconds don't wor much more. the scale o f the vegetation is big, not something you can see by a window and again, it,s make looks like a frame.

I don't olove the proporon frame/bath, there is something quite not realistic about it. If I take the lenght of the bath, the window should be about 6 feets square and at 2'6'' from the floor. So the window goes to 8'6'' high and we dom't see any ceiling. I think the fact you have just these 2 elements in the scene make hard to understand proportion since the windows and wall high are not standard.

nice color scheme
keep it up

[soroosh]

Hi LouisCho .
very thanks your comment and see my project .
for this projects i use this Image ( attach )
Best regards .

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