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MrHappy
05-22-2008, 06:32 PM
http://assets.cgsociety.org/nvart/299312_1211477563/680bound
(http://assets.cgsociety.org/nvart/299312_1211477563/1024bound)Final Version

MrHappy
05-22-2008, 06:35 PM
Thanks a lot Samione for your critique. Here is the final updated version of Good Intentions :).

Merlyn82
05-22-2008, 07:53 PM
Hey Chris

Nice image. The rockets look very clean, i think they would look better if you spent a short time time dirtying them up a tiny bit, also maybe you could add a tiny bit off blur to the whole image or some mist like a cloud layer with a very low opacity, this would make them fit into the image as a whole a bit better imo.

MrHappy
05-22-2008, 08:23 PM
Cheers bud :)

SFedor
05-23-2008, 09:42 AM
Congrats on your entry Happy! Looks like a nice jump up from the earlier version

My crit would be pretty much along the same lines as Merlyn. The only other thing I would suggest beyond that is perhaps adding "burst" trails in the clouds where the rockets emerge. Right now they are straight across, which is probably physically accurate, but visually, I expect to see some tendril like billows where the rocket burst through the clouds and teared a hole.

Best of luck!

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