ms. clean?

[Lordrych]

wow, you might want to kill the harsh cheeks making her look a little too much like a man. maybe round them out a bit more and the nose is huge giving her a beat up look.


Rych

[garbagemonkey]

hate to tell you, but this is to scale of an actual person you see, taken straight from profile, front, and side shots. Not everybody is as lovely as a supermodel. Part of her androgeny is lack of eyelashes, but still, I'm sure the real girl would love to know you think she's hideous.

[Lordrych]

Hey get offended if you want, i didn't mean any offense from it. I was just pointing out the problems with it. Yes of course not everyone is a supermodel, instead of taking offense you could just explain why the model is they way it is.


Rych

[garbagemonkey]

true, maybe silly to get offended, but i guess i'm just sick of all the teenage fantasy versions of what real people look like.

real people do have interesting bone structure and 'big noses'
-not offended on a modeling standpoint-

i can take that, but i don't see features that are not idealized as being problems.

[Cinema1954]

Are you by any chance using a camera with a short (less than 50mm) lens? If so, try a render with a focal length of about 100mm. To me, it looks like there's a bit of wide-angle distortion going on.

[PaxtonGerrish]

Props to garbagemonkey on this one.... I have to agree.. Iv seen way to many perfect perky cutesy teenage girls modeled lately around here.. :wip: I mean a lot of them are amazing models, and I like perky tits and full lips as much as the next red blooded monkey,:D but hasnt been a little over done?
not meaning to offend anyone with my ranting..

if i were to crit, i guess the corners of the mouth bug me a bit.... not to sure why...

but that aside, looks great to me,
keep it up!:applause:

[garbagemonkey]

thanks PaxtonGerrish,
will get on that corner o' the mouth thing. i agree, something a little strange.


Cinema1954,
good point. I do have a little wide angle distortion. thanks

don't worry, she'll get purttier. I guarantee that if you stripped the average girl of eyelashes, hair, and makeup she would be no beauty queen.

except for those lucky few ;)

[garbagemonkey]

still no hair, but that's next.
got focal length to be a little less 'distorty'

poor thing...
is she really that ugly?
maybe she should go on extreme makeover
aaarrgh!

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