2D Character - Vamp

[Xilica]

looks very nice to me,

the only thing i can comment on really is the mouth.

add some stuff on that black part for the mouth because i can't really see any detail for the lips etc.

[Tenshi]

Some fangs would be fitting :)

[melicion]

He seems a little flat to me... some defenition could help him look more interesting. Just my 2 cents.

[comfortablydumb]

i agree, he really needs some fangs.

I think you are going for a kind of comic look, but i would put a little more shade into him, give him a little more depth.

btw, is it me or does it kinda look like darth vader the undead?

[LordShaitan]

Maybe have the feet facing utwards instead of them facing inwards. Also, how is he holding the blade? I dont see an arm sticking out a little bit. The hand is also very 2d, maybe add a couple fingers behind the firt one. And some fangs would help it sell better

Also, take a look at the silhouette, it just looks like darth vader with a blade. Also, maybe a little bit of some ears?

Just some suggestions.

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