animation short in progress:una de vaqueros

[Rmortis]

:hmm: :hmm:
no comments?? that is bad?
some one?

please.:wip:

[Frinsklen]

no, not bad at all. A couple of suggestions though.

- I find the whole thing a bit dark. No highlights or shiny areas, which makes the whole thing kind of boring. To avid boredom you might also try adding new colors in there,
- there's a contrast between the way the character and the motorbike are designed. The cowboy has this nice cartoon look but that geometrical motorbike doesn't really fit in within the scene.
- the character itself looks nice, he might need some more appeal, I think his face looks slightly confusing right now. Check also the pose of his right hand.

"cuidado, caca" jaja, muy bueno!
la animación va bien, por lo menos la primera mitad, hasta que aparece el bicho raro del ojo... :curious: aunque en general toda ella es demasiado rígida y hay bastantes fallos de animación en los personajes.

I hope to see it finished


saludos

[Rmortis]

hi,
yes, need more work. we do this on the march, without planning the movements, I indicated to him how move camera (I mainly participate like scriptwriter and planning of planes).
personally do not touch to much the animation 3d (in general) and have to practice more, I have more hand in 2d.

Si ,lo del huevo es una rayada. Se ve que le deja un "recuerdo" encima?

Un saludo.

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