Queen of the instruments : The Piano, Emir Ombasic (2D)

[Fae]

Lovely work on the stained glass window. I love how you achieved that light, peaceful and serene effect with the glowy lighting. My only crit would be:

1. The piano & bench looks a tad short. I'm a piano player myself, and I'm pretty sure the height of the piano should be tall enough to allow room for you legs to be underneath it when folded at a right angle. At the moment the short legs of the piano + bench makes it look abit short and stubby, a little more height might impart a sense of elegance.

2. A little more definition on the ghostly pianist would be nice. At the moment it looks a bit squashed and unfinished, partially due to the awkard height of the bench. same goes for the cello. The shape looks a bit odd.

Other than that, as a mood-piece, it succeeds well. I can almost feel that quiet reverent feel of being in some deserted European mansion/cathedral and piano music wafting out.

[Tuor]

I agree with Fae's crits abuot the piano. It seems too short. But the light work on this piece is very good :)

[OmbasicE]

Thank you for the comments. I'm a beginner so those was wery helpful advices. Sorry for my english :)

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