CGTalk - Vehicle: Audi TT

plaguelord

05-17-2003, 04:50 AM

Hi, this is my first car. It's simple but I'm happy with the final image. c & c are really welcome!
he took me about 20 days.
(done in max 4 & brazil)
perspective:

http://www.ancestral.estudioiris.com.ar/3dgallery/AudiTT/cgtalk/audi_view.jpg

back:
http://www.ancestral.estudioiris.com.ar/3dgallery/AudiTT/cgtalk/audi_back2.jpg

Emberghost

05-17-2003, 04:57 AM

Looks very cool, but in your first pic/view it looks incredibly skinny...I may be incorrect though as I have not seen a TT in a while.

R.L.M

05-17-2003, 09:21 AM

nice..
you can improve the flashlight.. they look like a piece of plastic..
buy it's very good work..

Pjanssen

05-17-2003, 10:01 AM

Did you use blueprints as a reference ? It looks a bit out of proportions....

t r u n x z

05-17-2003, 10:22 AM

hm? colour is nice...
but? the machine looks a lil? narrow?
I always thought TT were pretty broad?
Also...work on the head lamps...
At the moment they dont go well with the rest of the car...

Other then that...nice working piece

RiotManZ

05-17-2003, 09:32 PM

This car looks quite fine.
Except for one 'failure'... it is way to thin.
give him a bit mor width.
I think the people out of Ingolstadt (the TT is bulit there) would be a little angry if they see this...:rolleyes
The material looks cool too:beer: :

plaguelord

05-18-2003, 06:51 AM

Maybe I make some mistake when I set the blueprints. I'll update the images soon with a more width.
and the lights are very simple, I know, but maybe in the next car I make more detailed lights/glass.

anyway, thanks to all for the c&c, they really help me a lot!!!

mysterio

05-18-2003, 01:43 PM

I built a TT a while ago, and should really post it.

Have you used SubDiv? I think you have and the give away is that the fillets pull in too much, which gives it that 'plasticine look'.

Add more divisions along the lenth of the fillet edge (see bonnet shutline) this should tighten up the fillet.

It is too narrow, there is a great reference site Thomas Suurland (i think) do a search. He has excellent blueprints, or just order the brochure.

The other thing is get as much photo ref as you can.

A really good start!:)

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