Iron man sketch

[matsman]

wow! nice clean lines there. good sense of perspective and mass. I like it! Only crit would be that the feet are somewhat small, also giving the idea the closest bottom leg is slightly rotated (when comparing top to bottom) maybe it actually is... but fix those feet before inking and colouring.

Nice! And welcome, by posting you have done your brave act for today :p

[Tymotzues]

Nice work.

I think the left upper arm is looking a bit flat, you might want to turn it out a little and give it a bit more body.
Also the right hand looks a little small and a bit too in line with the wrist, I'm not sure how this is on the actual suit design but you might want to increase the size of his palm slightly to separate it from the forearm.

[Arcanox]

Fantastic stuff so far, and not bad for a first post :D

As others have mentioned, the feet do look a bit small, but if he is also hovering in the pose you may want to consider the little flaps that open up on the back of his calf. I'd suggest looking at some reference to figure out how to draw in that detail.

[maddsketch]

yeh i was having some major problems trying to figure out the anatomy of the suit cause there aren't alot of pictures. but the article they just made in cgscociety might help me out actually. thnx alot of the crit guys that was very very constructive. From what i saw, the forearm pretty much covers the wrist but the hand is a little small. Again i really appreciate how constructive ur crits were because i usually get crappy advices and people just trying to insult more than tryin to help.

[exStatic1]

Hey, really nice sketch, the anatomy is almost perfect, I do have a couple crits, I'm in agreement about the right hand, I think it looks a bit too small, and a few of the fingers could be a little bigger as well, the left foot, also in agreement, it's a tad bit too small too. I think the stomach looks a bit flat as it is, but you could probably fix this when you add in the color. Here's a pretty good pic with almost an identicle pose, I was planning on drawing Ironman one day myself, it's pretty high res, so it should help out a little with the details, keep up the good work;

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v55/Nsane87/ironman1.jpg

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