Architectural or Environment for Exposé : What do you think?

[tbaille]

http://tbaille.site.voila.fr/stock/expo_04.jpg

[JohnR]

Hmmm, I like the ilumination, but I dont like the textures, it is there a glass? Maybe you should try to put more datails and an enviroment because it is very sad the view; But keep it up :thumbsup:

[Otos]

looks good so far...

if there´s glass, give it more reflection!

[Seo2]

I like how u did the leters and the glow/reflection u gave the talbes and counter. maybe u should watch for the shadow they cast onto the street.....
keep working on it...its good till now..

[tbaille]

Weekend bonus!

http://tbaille.site.voila.fr/stock/expo_11.jpg

Good weekend
thank you for the answers

[ME3D]

Go for more detail in the architecture. It seems pretty simple. The glows help but with lower level of detail it just seems to be trying to cover it up.
PM me if you need some reference material for architecture. hell seems like the image ive seen before an illustration, but have forgotten the name of it. A diner scene nearly the same.

[Phattro]

I like the mood of the lighting so far.

the composition and tone remind me of Hopper's "Nighthawks". If thats the atmosphere you are going for...I feel like you need more depth.

What's going on in the background? more hint of it?

hope to see more

[D_Nice]

Are you going to composite James Dean into it?


j/k It looks good. The overall tone is nice.

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