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StylizedReality
05-05-2008, 08:26 PM
Hey, everyone, this is my newest animation. It's pretty much done but I could still use some feedback.
http://www.veoh.com/videos/v8503151kTqYBK3f

SalvadorRuizJr
05-05-2008, 08:29 PM
Hat could use a little more work. Feels too floaty. You could play around with the hat hanging in the air a few frames before it falls.

mistasam02
05-07-2008, 02:23 AM
Hey looks great! I feel like the roll is too slow. That part looks too floaty, so speeding it up by a frame or two would help a lot (just my opinion of course). When the trapdoor opens, you could have him at anti gravity a half a second longer to show his facial expression change.... but that's another style thing you might not want to do. So far it's lookin good sir, keep it up! :D

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