View Full Version : Still : Apples
alexbox 05-15-2003, 03:25 PM http://www.starkast.net/bilder/3d/apples.jpg
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ahattemer
05-15-2003, 03:30 PM
alexbox - pretty nice composition and everything, also even though I don't think I have ever seen an apple that same color you have some good contrast between the apples and the background. The one thing that did catch my eye was the bump map on the apple, (it might just be the jpeg compression) but the apple looks way too rough, it needs some more shine to it, and right now it looks almost like it has a canvas bump map!
Other than that, great composition!
How do'ya like them apples?!
alexbox
05-15-2003, 03:34 PM
ok, thanks. I do realy lika to hear what you all think. [I am realy bad at spell "write" in English]
zeromancer1972
05-15-2003, 03:34 PM
well done, but i agree with ahattemer - less bump please ;)
hehe, i think i know the wood texture... maybe we got the same resource ??? :p
and: i bet you use C4D, do you?
keep goin' :bounce:
alexbox
05-15-2003, 03:37 PM
he he, yea... I do use Cinema 4d XL R7.
zeromancer1972
05-15-2003, 04:02 PM
i got something similar...
;) well now, this is my pic with THAT wood *g*
let's do a "synchron" rendering *lol* :scream:
alexbox
05-15-2003, 04:06 PM
he he, yea! :-)
alexbox
05-15-2003, 06:53 PM
Hm, any one ells ho can give me some tips?
alexbox
05-16-2003, 11:15 AM
No?
knebbes
05-16-2003, 12:13 PM
there is a "belt" around the apples where the texture gets stretched. on the right side of the left apple this can be seen quite well. i also think the bump map is too strong, but that has already been mentioned.
except of that they look good to me :thumbsup:
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