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Aith
05-04-2008, 11:03 AM
Hello everybody!!!
Thanks for looking...!




I'm still thinking out the hand/arm positions... I think the left eye of the lad-ee is too small, does anyone agree?

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v328/parchedtroop/weirdcopy.jpg


This one's still early days, but there's something wrong round her arm/torso area?

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v328/parchedtroop/knighting3.jpg
Aith
05-05-2008, 12:56 PM
Heh heh, I'm realllly popular
Don't worry; I haven't started his hands and legs yet... They won't stay like that! I just haven't drawn a man since I was 12 haha! So I thought I should. Feedback welcome!

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v328/parchedtroop/cypracopy3.jpg
lospeed
05-05-2008, 07:13 PM
on the second picture i think it's the position of the hand that looks weird...
her hand is pointed down very much, and it looks weird with the position of the hand...
maybe (i say maybe :P) it would look nicier if you would bring her arm (elbow) a bit more down so her hand isn't pointed so much to the water

sorry for my english, i hope you understand what i mean.
Aith
05-05-2008, 10:14 PM
No, thankyou very much, I'll definitely try to fix that! Heeey, you live in belgium? I'm going there next year... But my french is so bad :(
Aith
05-06-2008, 11:31 AM
Update on this fella. I could really use some advice guys!

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v328/parchedtroop/cypracopy4.jpg
lospeed
05-06-2008, 07:51 PM
No, thankyou very much, I'll definitely try to fix that! Heeey, you live in belgium? I'm going there next year... But my french is so bad :(

Flanders FTW ! :P
dutch... :)
i hate french too...
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