CGTalk - Last Breath Motel

xantirodriguez

05-02-2008, 10:17 AM

Hi Mates,
Theres my second serious matte painting, i wanted to create futuristic world TERMINATOR looking with some cold lights and the attention put on the Motel with some oranges gave on the house.

Your critics are wellcome, be hard i want to learn.
http://img166.imageshack.us/img166/1996/lbbiggr0.jpg

Bdude619

05-02-2008, 05:02 PM

Hey there,

I like the idea. Its very simple. My first thought was if thats a hotel, wheres the parking lot. But i suppose you could say its in the back lol.

Well the lighting needs a few tweaks. First, if it is night time, the only way there would be an orange light would be from a street light. Which might not be a bad idea. If you decide to keep the lighting as it is, i suggest working on the light hitting the street sign. As it is right now it makes it look really flat. And shadows, you need some shadows if your light is coming at that angle.

Good work so far,

-B

xantirodriguez

05-02-2008, 09:04 PM

hey dude!

Thanx for your words, yes i think that with those retouchs would better.

Will work on.

Thanx again.

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