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smithpixii
04-25-2008, 08:39 PM
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Title: Secret Love
Name: Alyson Smith
Country: United Kingdom
Software: Maya

Any tips on how i can improve this image would be greatly received as ive not been doing 3D for very long.
All elements modelled by me, the people are alphas on planes. The bit of ivy was made by Ivy Generator.
Thanks very much.
Cobster
04-26-2008, 08:27 PM
Hi Alyson,

This is a good start at 3D, better than my first attempts, the modelling is good. I think you could improve this image with more advanced lighting and rendering techniques.

All the best,
Claire.
Bubbaloo
04-27-2008, 10:54 PM
The thing that I can't look past is the left hand shown on the right of the picture. It looks like the view is supposed to be from her point of view which would make it physically impossible for her to open the curtains like that...
Dtox
04-28-2008, 12:15 PM
I 2nd the left handed view issue.
smithpixii
04-28-2008, 02:25 PM
Cobster,
Thanks for your comment, lighting and rendering are not my strong points ...yet. So much to learn!

Bubbaloo and Dtox,
Im sorrry if i have not made it obvious enough that the piont of view is not hers .....its ours, the viewers.
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