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IHaRMoNiC
04-23-2008, 09:59 PM
Hi everyone!

This is my first post on the CGTalk forums and I wanted to share some of my work with all you great people!

Below is a link to my current demo reel and I would appreciate any/all comments to help me improve.

http://michaelsabalvaro.wordpress.com/2008/01/29/demo-reel-08/

Thanks in advance! =)

- Michael

maxspider3000
04-24-2008, 09:55 AM
greet reel man ... congrats for finishing it ...

am not good at animation ... but I think in the jump shot the anticipation befor he jump doesn't looks good ....

the last shot was just so cool :)

-Yusuf

IHaRMoNiC
04-24-2008, 05:40 PM
Hi Yusuf,

Thanks for responding to my thread. I am truly grateful for your honest opinion. I'll continue to try and polish that jump shot and hopefully smooth out that anticipation portion. Thanks again!

- Michael

DrJohnnyFever
04-24-2008, 05:44 PM
I think the beginning was great!

Pooyag
04-24-2008, 06:53 PM
Great stuff... :thumbsup:

Cornibies
04-25-2008, 09:26 AM
Hi IHaRMoNiC

This demo reel actually made me laugh :applause:

I love the first two shoots with dialog .. they are just hilarious -and I am not quite sure why. Guess it's just soo good.

Yet, the last few shots are .. well.. duller. I am not an animation professional, so I probably cannot appreciate the effort in them – but a little white ball on a grey background seems a little too minimalistic for a graphical industry.

Still, this is definitely great work

keep it up

- Clemens

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