Uplift Universe - Image Entry: Ivelin Trifonov

[lapislazuli]

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Hi there:)here is my entry for the Challenge,i named this "Please Forgive me":):)

[lapislazuli]

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[lapislazuli]

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...again

[lapislazuli]

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This is my final colour sketch.I decided to change the alien-boy(make him look more "alien":):):)),hope you like it

[FrankCSlimski]

I like it. What does he need to be forgiven for? As a visual storyteller you might want to clue us in and tell more of their story.

[Slav]

i really like the color the this image. its really pleasing and i think the skin tone is what sells this image as it is right now. my only crit would be to point out the fact that the characters seem to be in awkward poses.

looking good keep it up!

[ReganStidolph]

Very cool image, colors are great, reads really well as a thumb nail, and the poses and the alien rock, keep it up.

[editablepauly]

Looks great!

a few critiques:

*The figures are a bit stiff (I am constantly guilty of this as well :) ) the lines of the humans arms and legs are very straight try giving them a slight bend to add some dynamics (In this case simply the act of holding ones self up)

* The perfect side profile of the alien is a little unnatural, try a 3/4 turn. also his (or her) lines are very straight. maybe bend them a bit as well.

great atmosphere and idea!

[bkeiser3d]

The color looks great and so is the mood. You just need to find a better shot that brings the viewer into the scene.

[lapislazuli]

Wow, guys. Thank U very much for the coments and crits.:)i'll update very soon!
All the best!!!

[plasteredcat]

It's looking very nice at the moment, but I have to agree with that it isn't reading very well at the moment. I kind of miss a gesture from "him" towards her, not such a standing up right postition, while she plays tough maybe...? Cool stuff, anyhow!

[lapislazuli]

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Hi again guys:)
this is my last update, i decide to rotate canvace,tryng to find a better romantic mood....:)

[lapislazuli]

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little update...

[MartinNielsen]

It works better now I think. I'm not sure about the alien design though. Maybe too much robot in it?

[lapislazuli]

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.... some closeups of alien and girl:)

[lapislazuli]

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...girl

[lapislazuli]

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[lapislazuli]

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.. getting closer...

[editablepauly]

Wow, its really come a long way :)

very nice.

[asparta]

excellent work - simple and clear. I like it very much. Congratulations.

[lapislazuli]

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My final image.
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......Aliens and people - so different in appearance, аnd in spite of all controled by the same emotions and feelings - love, joy, sadness...
.... so, if he has been rough with her, it is time for him to ask for forgiveness...
and may be she will forgive him...

[MartinNielsen]

This entry ended up looking very nice :thumbsup: Beautiful and clear composition.

[lapislazuli]

Thanks a lot guys!
Congrats to everyone who participate in this CG Challange!So many nice works. Good luck to everyone:)

[Ferx]

Hey Ivelin, cool image, like a lot the atmosphere and the feeling on it :thumbsup: Congratulations for this great work!! Best of luck!! Cheers!! :D

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