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milkweed
04-21-2008, 06:16 PM
http://i111.photobucket.com/albums/n150/nafegar/nose2-1.jpghttp://i111.photobucket.com/albums/n150/nafegar/lips.jpghttp://i111.photobucket.com/albums/n150/nafegar/nose.jpg
Some things i've been working on, would appreciate some critiques on the colors, shading, etc, pretty much anythingyou say, ill listern to...thanks

lospeed
04-21-2008, 08:04 PM
Hi there,

Great work

the first thing i saw looking pretty weird were the "noseholes" (if this is the correct english word :s)

on the picture the left one (right one for the human u're drawing) looks alot bigger than the right one. It's nose has got a thick left side and a small right side...

The lips are done very nice, maybe some more gloss on the right side and they look perfect to me

aldog
04-22-2008, 12:46 AM
lospeed:
"nostrils" is the word you're looking for.


The shadow inside the nostrils looks a little strange in both but the nose looks great. the lips are awesome as well

exStatic1
04-22-2008, 01:34 AM
I think the lips could use some more detail, when you look at a pair of lips there's usually a lot of individual lines you can see, go check out any refrence picture of a pair of lips, and you'll know exactly what I'm talking about. The colors and shading are pretty good though, I would just suggest setting the brush a bit harder for the edges, and I agree about the nostrils in the first nose, again, looking at some refrence you'll notice that it's not that dark inside the nostrils, you can usually see the ambient light inside, great sketches though.

milkweed
04-22-2008, 06:38 AM
Thanks for the critiques, I'll look at some noses and work on the nostrils.... Thanks again

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