1st WIP

[fredconv]

here s the render pic

[fredconv]

just an zoom of the apple
how about it ?
.....

[p0lym0rph]

heee c'est pas mal du tout fait gaffe quand même aux pommes elles sont un peu trop étirées en hauteur,en tout cas bienvenue:p

[fredconv]

trying some few changes on light ...

[Remi]

Personally I think the lighting in this scene is killing it...you might need some better texturing on objects too...the apples texture looks fine to me....but the scene, there just isn't something right going on there. Keep working on it.:thumbsup:

[fredconv]

okay thanks for comments ^___^

i ll work on it (textures and lights)

this one was done before seeing post so nothing more on the pic, juste a little lighter...

[rollmops]

Good composition, nova!
But the reaction to the light ( I mean the highlightsize may be smaler on the coffee machine). The plate is almost grey; could you push a little more the specularity?
You'll get more peps in the picture with a little Zblur and a halo around the highlights... Go on!:thumbsup:

[VelvetDragon]

Let the sunshine in :)

[CGmonkey]

Yeah let some sunshine through the venetin blind!

and see if you can make the glass shader on the coffée can a bit less saturated or grey! ;)

Love the apples though :applause:

[rrobert]

Apples are ok, background is not to ok... :shrug:

[VelvetDragon]

Your pic is cool :)

Just put some more lights guy!

[fredconv]

thanks for your comment

still trying to make the scene look better....
let me know about it :wavey:

^__^

[rollmops]

:shame:
Keep the sunshine in as a main light.
If you chose the lamp you need some transluscence on the"abajour" ( tu vois c'que j'veux dire...)
The shadows doesn't have to stay allways black.
the plate is lighter, ok, but now is the bottom of the apples too dark.
Let's imagine how real light would spread.
If you don't use radiosity you can still fake with a liht undeu the plate (with decay)
Did you see the light tutorial (http://www.cgtalk.com/showthread.php?s=&threadid=24821&highlight=tutorial) of ila_solomon?

keep on

[Madpear]

Take a look at this: http://nicolaslesaffre.free.fr/12.htm
Use it as reference for your lightning

[gagn]

Hey there Nova!

Greetings from a previous stagiere at Movida! (that's me..)
Hope you will have a great time there, at least I did.

Keep working on your pictures, it looks promising!

/Gabriel

thanks Rollmops for giving me the tip ! :beer:

[fredconv]

well it s a bit different from the start but i m still working on it when i got free time ...

looking for comments thanks :)


since i m here :thumbsup: anyone in brussels wanna make a bowling with me ? :beer:

next i ll try something different ....

[Madpear]

Much better but....

- The outside light is too white (seems to be a shoot in a studio with white walls)
- Check the textures of the walls, it's like a rusted metal
- Check the apple in the front, it looks like an apricot.
- the coffee machine is cgi.

Keep on

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