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ua858
05-13-2003, 06:50 AM
I did a very old lady portait today. and really want to u guys give me some comms. thanks a lot.

ua858
05-13-2003, 06:57 AM
this's the concept, I did a long time ago.

DragonKore
05-13-2003, 06:57 AM
Looking good. I like the cartoony look. You gave her a look that defiantly tells she's old. I don't really have anything to suggest. Good work. :thumbsup:

ua858
05-13-2003, 07:56 PM
thank u,DragonKore
that is a little update.
guys,any comms?

betelgeuse
05-13-2003, 09:08 PM
I know it's supposed to be cartoony, but I believe it would benefit from being longer front-to-back. It just seems a little flat.
I like the characterization, though.

valu
05-13-2003, 10:12 PM
I like the character design an the thin look . You could just work a bit on the eyelids and let the hair falls a little bit on the front and on the cheek.

give us more !!!!!

My last Thread:

http://www.cgtalk.com/showthread.php?s=&threadid=43140&perpage=15&pagenumber=3

ua858
05-14-2003, 08:54 AM
thank u guys, that is the body so far, how she looks??

ua858
05-18-2003, 04:32 AM
thank u guys, your crits are really really helpful.
that is the update. any new crits?

ua858
05-18-2003, 04:36 AM
head

ua858
05-18-2003, 04:37 AM
hand

p0lym0rph
05-18-2003, 10:10 AM
cool non realistic style :thumbsup:

Darakusan
05-18-2003, 02:08 PM
hmm for the hand i dun think u should put the bone for the thumb..
u know wat i mean??

3 - 4 bones seen on the top of the hand is enough.... the 5th for the thumbs looks kind of odd...

but nevertheless, nice efforts! and nice model!

ua858
05-19-2003, 09:44 AM
thanks.all
here is a cane for her:)

p0lym0rph
05-19-2003, 09:51 AM
cool,but the hands are too smalle(sorry for my english:hmm: )

phoenix2k
05-19-2003, 10:14 AM
great model, but yeah the arms and hands need resizing! :thumbsup:

ua858
05-20-2003, 03:10 AM
hey guys it's a little update, how is the size of hands and arms right now?
thanks.
I will work on the scarf on her shoulder later on.

ua858
05-20-2003, 03:14 AM
sideview

coCoKNIght
05-20-2003, 09:19 AM
I think the proportions are just fine. I like all the details you put into it. It's coming along nicely, hope you texture her soon! :)

ua858
05-24-2003, 06:19 AM
that is the update for the scarf on her shoulder.
I tried Shaghair,but doesn't good on her. maybe I do not know shaghai very well.
so, I think I am done the model now. what u think guys?
thank u```````````

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