Animation: A short cartoon animation

[woodwoox]

wow good job :buttrock:

[keithlango]

Cute!

I like the simple style. But I'm goofy that way. ;)



-k

[Morten_Jensen]

Superfine :applause:

Funny and snappy. What more can a person ask for ?

Good job...







Best regards
Morten

[MidNit]

nice job, cute and funny... :thumbsup:

[Tudor]

Thank you all for your comments :)

Keith: You are actually one of my main sources for inspiration! My animations really took of after I started using the way of animating you describe on your homepage. I use it all the time now :)

[Book]

Great animation and character with limited forms, and they're all so happy at the end!:applause:
Good job!

[dzogchen]

Hehehehehe....simple but cute and fun to watch :thumbsup:

[Linus Ericson]

Nice animation only one think that I didnt like is camera change on 0:35.

[elvis75k]

HA HA HA HA HA HA! Wow!!! :bounce:

[aylora]

It really nice. Teach me! :bounce:

/Ramona
ramona@aiylora.com

[Soeren Nielsen]

Hahaha Tudor, so incredibly cute.. nice job.. only thing I would tweak a little is after the green guy comes down, and the two others turn their "heads" slowly and look at eachother, then turn their "heads" again and look at the green guy.. it seems a little robotic

[Chagidiel]

That is simply GREAT!!!

Magnificent how alive it apears even without sound! WITH sound this short is a killer! Hope you will let us experience that.

:applause:

[Tudor]

Thank you all :)

I'll take the critique and work on it, and post an updated version in a while (takes about 2 days to render)

And about sound.. Anyone up for it? :) I totally suck at it and don't even own any programs to do it.

[Linus Ericson]

2 days to render, whitch render do you use and on whitch computer do you render?

[elvis75k]

....this may be usefull. :lightbulb

[Tudor]

I use LW 7.5.
it takes about 1.5 minute per frame, due to the radiosity that I use. I know I could fake it, but I can live with the rendertimes.
But it is 1000 frames that needs to be rendered on my 1.8Ghz machine. I have to turn it off at night because the noise prevents me from sleeping.

[elvis75k]

sorry i was too busy to laghin'.... and i miss the link!! hehe

http://www.elvis75k.com/bouce_kit.mp3

[shoey]

Love it:applause: :applause: :applause:

Would be great with sound, excellent animation though

[Xilica]

haha nice :beer:

[Beholder]

:bounce: :bounce: :bounce: :thumbsup:

[percydaman]

that is just adorable...laughed so hard i think i threw out my back. Just too good. I dont even care about the sound...that lack of sound kinda gives it its own feel

[Sgt.Pepper]

Sell-out! Posting at big international forum :D

Looks great man, but just as everyone else is saying, it's the soundfx thats missing.
How about that guy that fixed the sfx on the early version? It sounded great in my ears.

[Mangled Poly]

awesome.. nice work

[FLOw]

omg..

[slartibartfass]

very funny and simple...nice one!

[Tudor]

I have already mailed him :)

Originally posted by Sgt.Pepper
Sell-out! Posting at big international forum :D

Looks great man, but just as everyone else is saying, it's the soundfx thats missing.
How about that guy that fixed the sfx on the early version? It sounded great in my ears.

[cgwolf]

awesome and cute at the same time, nice smooth animations as well - I like it.

[Sgt.Pepper]

OK, good! Kepp it up!

[Dearmad]

Thank you for not punchlining the end with something ridiculous and uncreatively cliched. That was refreshing!:applause: :thumbsup:

[urgaffel]

lol that was really really cute :D The only thing that stood out has been mentioned and that was the robotic look back and forth. The rest was just sweet. Very nice job

[FloydBishop]

VERY NICE!!

Reminded me a lot of something you used to be able to see on the Muppet Show (not saying this is a rip off or anything like that, just that this is in that same vein of simple humor).

I'd like to see some more of these characters!!

[fadegboye]

can i just say...nice and simple is the best! Great work!

:thumbsup:

[proton]

When can we see part 2!

[singularity2006]

lolrof!! That is soooooo savagely adorable!!!!!! =DDDDDDDD

[m-greenwood]

That's really cute!
Nice work.

[gibias]

VERY CUTE !!! The characters expressions are simple but efective.
The only thing I miss is the sound. :thumbsup:

[Aaron]

Very very funny stuff. Great thinking time, love the acting. Very cute =)

Peace,
-A.

[h4d35]

hey! nice coincidence

i had TBL's homepage up right next to this window when surfing over your anim :)

i also read an article i think you wrote.. it was a couple of days ago.. in an old swedish amiga mag.

possible soulmate here ;)

nice animation by the way!
humm... when the blobs jumped up and down it looked like their feet (foot) jumped forward if you see what i mean

i also get big Weebl and Bob vibes from this!

/Hannes

[xynaria]

LOL Loved it....even without sound......I think the phrase is ENCORE!!!!!! :beer: :beer:

[dg3d]

Great animation there, very fluid, simple model.

[KotsVlok]

LMAO!!!...That kinda humor of looking to others faces and then do something is sooooooo funny :D :D

5 Stars from me! :applause:

[MolemanSD7]

Hey man, first off, the animation as a whole looks really nice. My only beef with it, comes when the little blue guy jumps up to do a flip. I just found it a little hard to read, and only understood what he did after he did it. A basic rule in animation most of my teacher have said is to show people what the character will do, do the action, then show then what he's done. So, I have two suggestions. One, would be to lessen the motion blur and maybe slow it down some, and the other would be to add some kind of a horizon line, or some other anchoring element we can orient ourselves with. Thats all I got. Hope this could help ya. Nice job though, I love the secondary motion.:thumbsup:

[Phwhitfield]

This is just FUN to watch :-)

[Kieguy]

:bounce: :bounce: :bounce:


hehe...really cute and simple...me likey!

My only concern is for the blue guy especially...with the character designed the way he is, I was afraid the top of his head was gonna rip off at the back of his jawline. :scream:

Kiddin...hey, as long as he can deal with it without losing his head...:D

[arvid]

I laughed real hard when all 3 started bouncing :D funny :)

[Goatfuzz]

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[cutepixie]

hahaha it reminds me of me :D thats so cute and i love how the characters look great job :thumbsup:

[iBlue]

awesome! BOUNCE BOUNCE!!! :bounce:

[pencil-head]

very silly. :D
i like it alot. epecially when they all start bouncing

:bounce: :bounce: :bounce:

[hanzo]

Realy funny animation nice emotional movment:bounce: hehe good work..:thumbsup:

[facial]

:thumbsup: Well done.

[Neural Riptide]

Wonderful animation! :applause:

[lricho]

Coolies! Me likes this a lot :D

[katon]

nice job man, very cute:applause:

[pants]

hehe, been forever since i've posted, but that animation....... whew. unbelievably awesome. after busting my butt on finals, it was nice to come home, dl the video, laugh ridiculously hard, show my room-mates (who also laughed ridiculously hard), then send the link to my friends (who along with any sane individual, laughed ridiculously hard).

:insane: stellar work :insane:

[Tudor]

Hey!

I totally agree!
The main problem, I think, is the camera that totally destroys the arc of the movement.. Will try to reposition it :)

Originally posted by MolemanSD7
Hey man, first off, the animation as a whole looks really nice. My only beef with it, comes when the little blue guy jumps up to do a flip. I just found it a little hard to read, and only understood what he did after he did it. A basic rule in animation most of my teacher have said is to show people what the character will do, do the action, then show then what he's done. So, I have two suggestions. One, would be to lessen the motion blur and maybe slow it down some, and the other would be to add some kind of a horizon line, or some other anchoring element we can orient ourselves with. Thats all I got. Hope this could help ya. Nice job though, I love the secondary motion.:thumbsup:

[gagn]

Hi Tudor!

I´m really impressed by this animation, the characters express so much emotion!

Keep up the good work!

Congratulations on the front page plug ... :thumbsup:

/Gabriel

[Joril]

\o/

Adorable!! :)
But
I thought a big mean brick was gonne drop on them, crushing te innocense.
I don't know what makes me think things like that :surprised
But I'm glad it ended like that :)

[malcolmvexxed]

hilarious, i just sent it to my nephew and he loved it (although i'm bothered that my 10 year old nephew knows how to use a computer as well as I do.)

:buttrock:

[Facial Deluxe]

That is excellent :bounce:

[DangerousLlama]

haha:applause:
love how they open their mouths at eachother then start bouncing :)

[BadKarma]

haha very nice lovingthe simplisticness (sp) ! and the rendering is great too... are you thinking of putting any sounds on there? some little hopping noises :D

Joril, i thought something was gunna fall on them too.. i think its the way the camera zooms out. still great tho !

BadKarma

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