nite room

[karthik420]

hey so many peoiple visit u need to critique on this got it..

[johnnyMac]

not bad. i think there are some things you could do to make it better though.

1. it looks like you may have lit your room using ambient lighting instead of using several soft point lights with intensity falloff. it's just a way to fake radiosity throughout the room.

2. the spotlight on the wall could use a soft edge too. i suppose it doesnt have to but that's just my suggestion.

3. is the image on the wall a tv screen or a picture? if it's a picture it probably wouldnt be that illuminated. if it's a tv then the light from the tv would affect the room somehow.

4. i'm a little confused what the blue box is and the black area in the right hand corner.

alright. you wanted some feedback so there you have it. with some lighting and rendering tweaks this could be an even better image.

jmac

[karthik420]

yaa dude its picture frame its inside a cruise liner u see and blue boxx wat happ was i waS DOIN SOMETHIN THEN I FORGOT TO REMOVE THT stuff frm tht anyways its nothin ill delete it off.

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