WIP Arwen

[Flash FROG]

wow that is a nice picture. the hair looks incredibly good. the only thins that i have to say about it is that the upper lip loks a little to big and the eyes look too small and a little to far away from the head.
You don't really need to change this though, it looks fine.
Great job:thumbsup:

[Angelus26]

I agree with what FlashFrog said, eyes and top lip, I would change them though, because at the moment they are out of proportion, otherwise coming along well.

[wgreenlee1]

Can we see wires please?

[akademus]

Well, model is propotional. I guess problem is there's no shadows for now (only radiosity).

Here are wire's

http://users.teol.net/~vojo/Wire01.JPG

http://users.teol.net/~vojo/Wire02.JPG

http://users.teol.net/~vojo/Wire03.JPG

http://users.teol.net/~vojo/Wire04.JPG

http://users.teol.net/~vojo/Layout.JPG

akademus

[Nightwing]

Excellent work :thumbsup:

Quite a good likeness. Love the hair as well. The skin generally looks V good, albeit a bit shiny round the nose. Looks as if light is emanating from her left nostril, but that's the radiosity...shadows would be good yeah.

Oh you might want to increase the poly count in her ears somewhat, and take a look at the lighting around the back of her neck, again the hair probably needs to cast shadow there.

[hypercube]

The overall model and structure look great, she's coming along well, and as said the hair map is great..

I agree that there are issues though..The eyes seem to be spaced a little too wide or they could be too small. The mouth and chin are off slightly too..assuming you mean her to look like Liv Tyler that is, and not a different Arwen. Her lips are that large, but the features there are too "sharp" feeling, like the corners of the mouth.

I think you're right in that more in depth lighting and shadows would help as well though.

Anyway just some little things to tweak and she'll be awesome..look forward to more. :thumbsup:

[wgreenlee1]

akademus...
Excellent modeling man...
Yeah one thing you might want to try is blocking the model from extreme radiosity.Use planes and then just place them around her to block the radiosity...
Ive done that before.
That way you still get a warm soft look with out the harshness of too much radisoity.

Looking good though!:thumbsup:

[akademus]

wgreenlee1: I did put few planes around her, but they are luminent yellowish so they boost radiosity (there are only 2 lights in scene). I'll try to lower radio intensity a bit and see how it will come up. I'll send shadowed renders soon

[akademus]

Shadows added...

I think her eyes doesn't look so small now???

http://www.firedragon.com/~lwg3d/wip/2003/05/12-741442.jpg

akademus

[akademus]

Some texture and lightning fixes, this is a rough render, but more to come... soon

http://www.firedragon.com/~lwg3d/wip/2003/05/15-4655.jpg

akademus

[mirkoj]

oj kolega sta bi sa linkovma? nesto im ne fercera sta li? :)))
Cujemo se sutra, kava i to :)
A ja bas rekoh da vidim kako si je sredio :)
Uzivaj :))

[Nosalis]

Now it looks much better, .. keep up great work there

[akademus]

New one, I have fixed maps on neck and chest, again did some light changes (does anyone knows good book about lightning?). I had to move left hair part because it makes some shadow artifacts on body. I tried to render with monte carlo radiosity (lightwave), it took twelwe hours and lw was still on 1/5 pass.

http://www.firedragon.com/~lwg3d/wip/2003/05/19-337110.jpg

I guess i have to work now on dress and background and that will be it

cheers,

akademus

[phoenix2k]

wow... nice! ...

she does look like arwen although she also reminds me of that new girl in the charmed series... dunno what her name is tho :D...

looking good!!! :thumbsup:

[fredconv]

:eek: niiiiiiiceeeeeee
good one here O_O

[Gab3d]

Keep on going, great work !

[psumo]

great job

liv tyler is a hotty

looks very much like her

the rim light on the right side just next to the
ear feels out of place

did you paint in the shadows?

maybe the shadows need more saturation
instead of going into grey

[akademus]

No, shadows are rendered, one area - one shadow map and radiosity. Rim light is spot far from her on back right side but it's 150%. I'm still looking for good lightning

akademus

[akademus]

newbie render, still some things to fix but i hope i'll finish this soon.

http://www.firedragon.com/~lwg3d/wip/2003/05/20-412315.jpg

cheers,

akademus

[TheFreak]

That is really good.

I think the lighting definitly helps bring out the eyes, but it still seems odd to me.

I'm not being funny here and i'll be the first to admit that i am years off something this good but just for your own work. The image has no life. She kinda looks like an Arwen Manequin if you know what i mean.

Maybe it's just me but i don't see any personality in the face. I think it's something about the eyes, they are the window to the soul but at the moment she looks like she has no soul.

Don't get me wrong though the pic looks FANTASTIC but i just thought i would pass on my two cents :)

Greak Work!

[akademus]

Eyes are mirror of the soul, but only if you turn reflections on them ;). Here is small update, i'm working on a dress model now, more to come...

http://www.firedragon.com/~lwg3d/wip/2003/05/22-592606.jpg

cheers,

akademus

[akademus]

dress coming along. Falling parts killed me, but it's progressing

http://www.firedragon.com/~lwg3d/wip/2003/05/22-647090.jpg

akademus

[DoctorStopMo]

Wow, that's really amazing! It's a lot better than the Arwen I'll be making (I'm workin on an LOTR RPG computer game based on the books, and she'll probably be modeled). Keep up the great work. Looks like she stepped out of the movie.

[dark_lotus]

WOW!

I can't believe Leigh hasn't posted yet!!

This is amazing, can't wait to see the finished version!!

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