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CartoonBox
04-08-2008, 02:15 PM
Giuseppe Severino is entered in the "Uplift Universe Challenge" update: View Challenge Page (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/uplift_universe/view_entries.php?challenger=15227)

Latest Update: Final Image: the countness
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/20/15227/15227_1209979257_medium.jpg (http://forums.cgsociety.org/showthread.php?p=5130294#post5130294)

DeeVad
04-08-2008, 02:20 PM
Hi Giu ! Long time no see !

Really great to know you joining the contest. I will follow each step and good luck !
Friendly,

- David

CartoonBox
04-08-2008, 03:23 PM
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/20/15227/15227_1207668209_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/20/15227/15227_1207668209_large.jpg)

Hi all
This is my concept; an alien council who is speaking with the pilot of a spaceship comming from Earth (with a hologram).

DFeKT
04-08-2008, 04:01 PM
I'm looking forward seeing how this will turn out :)

Neubius
04-08-2008, 04:11 PM
great sketches!

CartoonBox
04-08-2008, 05:14 PM
ks David ;)
Nice to see tou here!

maxspider3000
04-08-2008, 06:23 PM
I liked the concept even if I think it needs to be more strong, or maybe after knowing the story behind it I will change my mind ^_^

nice characters ... especially the monkey dude

good luck :)

nightwoodwolf
04-08-2008, 06:56 PM
the sketch looks really good .. looking forward for more updates

CartoonBox
04-09-2008, 11:43 AM
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/20/15227/15227_1207741380_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/20/15227/15227_1207741380_large.jpg)

Just the progress...
I'll explain you all my concept, but with my bad english i need time :)

CartoonBox
04-10-2008, 08:49 AM
The color's first step.
now if you have any advices you're welcom

CartoonBox
04-10-2008, 08:55 AM
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/20/15227/15227_1207817740_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/20/15227/15227_1207817740_large.jpg)

i've a probleme, when i upload my image, it's the hold in the forum...

i hope it will be the good

---> ha ok! The color's first step.
now if you have any advices you're welcom

CartoonBox
04-10-2008, 12:16 PM
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/20/15227/15227_1207829760_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/20/15227/15227_1207829760_large.jpg)

for now, i don't know what can i do for the backround, but it's in progress!

CartoonBox
04-10-2008, 02:39 PM
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/20/15227/15227_1207838380_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/20/15227/15227_1207838380_large.jpg)

i'm going to finish it i think.

maxspider3000
04-10-2008, 02:41 PM
the colors look greet, maybe the stand of the hologram a bit out of detail compare with the rest of the scene ....

is it what the final background will look like ? or there is will be some updates ?

- Yusuf

CartoonBox
04-10-2008, 02:59 PM
hum, for the back i don't know...if you have an idee, you are welcom.
i have to make a pause of one day i think.For the hologram, it's true, i've to work on it...

thx ;)

CartoonBox
04-11-2008, 10:38 AM
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detail 1

CartoonBox
04-11-2008, 10:41 AM
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/20/15227/15227_1207910469_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/20/15227/15227_1207910469_large.jpg)

detail 2

CartoonBox
04-11-2008, 10:44 AM
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Detail 3, and next, the full image.

CartoonBox
04-11-2008, 10:47 AM
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/20/15227/15227_1207910819_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/20/15227/15227_1207910819_large.jpg)

ok, now i've a background, i'll work on the hologram because i dont like it...
sorry for the bad optimisation

THE NEXT IMAGE IS THE SAME BUT IN BEST JPEG'S QUALITY

Neubius
04-11-2008, 10:50 AM
looking really nice, i love your line style, super sweet with the colours in!

( space monkeys! yay! )
:D

CartoonBox
04-11-2008, 11:11 AM
thx a lot

and sorry for the bad optimisation, it's not easy to make a big format for the forum.

CartoonBox
04-11-2008, 11:43 AM
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:D

now the optimisation is ok.
I hope you'll like it!

CartoonBox
04-11-2008, 01:08 PM
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/20/15227/15227_1207919328_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/20/15227/15227_1207919328_large.jpg)

now it's time for lighting and effects.

now, i need your comments to finalise, please post it, you can help me.

Pegahoul
04-11-2008, 01:26 PM
The alien council woman has a great design! Very cool. Keep it up ^^

more contrast on the lighting maybe, with the background darker and the green hologram as the brightest light and focal point of the scene.

CartoonBox
04-11-2008, 02:55 PM
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/20/15227/15227_1207925729_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/20/15227/15227_1207925729_large.jpg)

like this?

skater
04-11-2008, 03:57 PM
good job;)!! i like it!! colors are very expressive;)!!!
I am curious for the final job :bounce: :buttrock:

CartoonBox
04-14-2008, 08:40 AM
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Hi all!

I've constrated the colors.
Now, i need your eyes to finish it.
Do you think it can be ok now?
Or do you prefer the first version?

Post your critics, i'm ready!

and thx skater ;)

PS: hum, i think the first is best finally....

CartoonBox
04-14-2008, 09:25 AM
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/20/15227/15227_1208165115_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/20/15227/15227_1208165115_large.jpg)

my last post until a response :)

andreas-V
04-14-2008, 09:41 AM
Maybe it is a litttle too late to write this, but i think there is not enough going on in this picture.The Aliens are merly standing around, there is no communication between Alien Queen and hologram(they don't look at each other).
Your painting style is great and i like the designs, but the piece could use a little more drama.
greetings

CartoonBox
04-14-2008, 10:14 AM
it's not too late :)
Thanks, i will draw a new man for the hologram and working on the Alien's face

OZ
04-14-2008, 01:19 PM
cool tech design!! the olo-weeled-pole is a great idea!

CartoonBox
04-14-2008, 01:40 PM
new face, new hologram...

CartoonBox
04-14-2008, 01:50 PM
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/20/15227/15227_1208180999_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/20/15227/15227_1208180999_large.jpg)

The countess

Himin the Countess, spokesman for the council is listening to Admiral Keith.
While its application of collision is about to be accepted, the monkeys are preparing to do their rebelion.

Hunk and Shlam, spies infiltrated as slaves of the Countess fear that the arrival of humans will be a problem for there plans...

(sorry for my english)

CartoonBox
04-15-2008, 11:15 AM
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/20/15227/15227_1208258138_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/20/15227/15227_1208258138_large.jpg)

I'm still working :)

sasquatch70
04-15-2008, 08:07 PM
Awesome wardrobes. Good job.

chilombiano
04-16-2008, 01:43 PM
this is looking really good. awesome custom design especially . and those monkeys too!
i'll take a look again for more comments.

MartinNielsen
04-17-2008, 08:01 PM
Good stuff :) One thing you should be mindful of is the light sources. Right now your main character and center of attention is lit from two equally strong light sources. I think I would let the green light be the primary source for the main character, and the blue for the secondary characters. Just a suggestion :)

CartoonBox
05-05-2008, 09:20 AM
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/20/15227/15227_1209979257_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/20/15227/15227_1209979257_large.jpg)

i hope you will like it.

Ivy00
05-05-2008, 09:49 AM
lol I love the little characters carrying the train of the robe. This is coming along great :)

MartinNielsen
05-05-2008, 10:20 AM
Nice final :)

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