WAR BEAST character

[Annuostivix]

It's not a wip? If it's finished, you should stick it in the finished gallery :) people will still tell you what you could improve and stuff, and as you improve, you can just update your image. i see people do that lots, i think. I like this model, thought the canopy or little shade maker for the chair should have a better texture. And i guess the beast itself could use a texture or something. But I really like the theme, and especially the way the beast is shaped. its hind legs are cool :D I would like to see some texturing and cleaning up being done though, it would really make this complete. If you dont know how to texture, you can really easily find tons of really esy to follow mapping guides online, you'd be surprised with how easy it is :) Oh yeah, and maybe his head should be less like a box at the front. but you may have intended for that shape. If it were me making the model, i would round it a little and make it a little less uniform. Kinda mess up the different sides, you know. Hopefully I'll see an update though, that would be cool :D

[Clave]

That's a pretty cool looking beast. :thumbsup:

As for presentation, it would be good if the bottom picture was a close-up?

[lordmachuca]

i tlooks okay, but i cant see much of it.
try to shoew some differeant views of it

cant really tell whats going on with the hinfd legs.
do you plan on texturing this guy?

what are you emphisising, the beast or teh shit on top of the beast. i cand really tell.

make the beast stand out

[danbucknam]

Aerestis:

[danbucknam]

Aerestis

Thanks for the feed back, I plan on texturing this, I don't know alot about texturing, but i think some bump maps would really help. I also think putting him an a desert environment might help too. I will work with the top canapy.

lordmachuca


I like the way you put this "what are you emphisising, the beast or teh shit on top of the beast. i cand really tell. "

[DrakeX]

you could show some more angles when you present it. right now it's pretty much the same view mirrored.

[danbucknam]

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[Ckretone]

i think its a really strong peice i really like the model...i've only done charatcer models myslef neevr a four legged creature of any sort i'm just curious how do you start the model in a bind pose?
:surprised

[LIMBAUL_ABIGGOR]

hey thats nice stuff reminds my off sulbalba from episode 1, the only thing i can say is he should be bigger than the chair, but thats just me, but nice:thumbsup:

[danbucknam]

Ckretone

hey thanks, I just started from a concept sketch.http://www.layerten.com/art/beastdrawing.jpg

then i did the whole body from a box in nendo, just extruding legs and head to get proportions right, from there it was all refining and smooth.

LIMBAUL_ABIGGOR


cool, I have gotten that before about this model, your probably right about the chair, he would be a bit more intimidating if he was bigger.:buttrock:

[danbucknam]

i forgot the tail though:annoyed:

[Threedeemer]

Wow, excellent concept and model, Its developing nicely. Looking forward to seeing the textures.

[danbucknam]

the only texture i havent done is for the beast itself thanks:buttrock:

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