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JoPu
04-03-2008, 04:06 PM
Joko Purnomo is entered in the "Uplift Universe Challenge" update: View Challenge Page (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/uplift_universe/view_entries.php?challenger=15131)

Latest Update: Final Image: Final image fix
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/20/15131/15131_1210672834_medium.jpg (http://forums.cgsociety.org/showthread.php?p=5147455#post5147455)

JoPu
04-03-2008, 05:28 PM
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/20/15131/15131_1207243733_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/20/15131/15131_1207243733_large.jpg)

Concept: Human and Alien playing a chess game

Environment: Alien Planet

Idea: The Alien too smart, so the Man need a chess guide to improve his chess gameplay skill

JoPu
04-04-2008, 01:28 AM
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Hi,
This is my Sketch2 Update

JoPu
04-06-2008, 09:06 AM
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/20/15131/15131_1207472778_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/20/15131/15131_1207472778_large.jpg)

Sketch No.3, same concept, with composition

Pegahoul
04-07-2008, 03:24 PM
The 3rd sketch is intriguing, though my suggestion it would be better looking with different perspective. Like making the chessboard closer to the scene, and the two kids are shown close up. It's hard to explain without drawing it though...

JoPu
04-11-2008, 03:44 PM
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/20/15131/15131_1207928689_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/20/15131/15131_1207928689_large.jpg)

Hi, Thank you for your suggestion Pegahoul.

This is Sketch 4.

JoPu
04-14-2008, 11:09 PM
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/20/15131/15131_1208214542_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/20/15131/15131_1208214542_large.jpg)

Final Sketch (My choice)

Concept: Best Friend Forever, Old Friends,
Alien and Man, The two have been friends for 40 years

JoPu
04-14-2008, 11:38 PM
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/20/15131/15131_1208216315_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/20/15131/15131_1208216315_large.jpg)

Alien 3D Model

lotaH
04-15-2008, 12:15 AM
god start!

JoPu
04-16-2008, 02:24 AM
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/20/15131/15131_1208312665_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/20/15131/15131_1208312665_large.jpg)

Young Alien Head and torso sculpt

JoPu
04-16-2008, 02:28 AM
Thanks IotaH

JoPu
04-16-2008, 02:36 PM
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/20/15131/15131_1208356602_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/20/15131/15131_1208356602_large.jpg)

Young Alien Sculpt WIP

Pegahoul
04-16-2008, 03:59 PM
alien looks cool!

JoPu
04-16-2008, 04:18 PM
Thanks Pegahoul:), still working on more detail of the young alien and armor

plasteredcat
04-16-2008, 05:10 PM
Good work so far... I like the third sketch, I think it'll look great as some kind of an ancient engraving in some tomb, just giving up the idea of aliens and humans playing chest in the dawn of time. Keep it up...:thumbsup:

JoPu
04-16-2008, 05:25 PM
Thanks for your idea harachte, I appreciate it:)

mdavid
04-17-2008, 03:38 AM
That is one fantastic alien. I love the idea that he's good at chess! Really nice work. I'll be keen to watch this develop

CGIPadawan
04-17-2008, 04:46 AM
This is great modelling!

I love the Alien....

My suggestion would be to try and emphasize his relationship with the aged human "best friend"......by maybe adding a bit of acting in the picture and try to focus on the moment between a Master and Apprentice....

It's possible the older human is like a Chess Grandmaster...and the young alien is looking really interested as he sees the human making a move. Maybe the alien is taking up the game.

This is just an addition as I think you have many sketches involving a scene like this...
But I just think there will be extra magic with EYE CONTACT like if the human is slyly looking at the alien...and the alien is also looking at him....

As if the alien is asking.... "What... Don't look at me.... Just finish your move!" It can be a very entertaining scene.

:)

JoPu
04-17-2008, 06:27 AM
Thanks Mdavid and CGIPadawan for suggestion, yeah i think that good idea, thanks.:)
i still confuse with my sketch too, which one is more fit with the challenge.

JoPu
04-17-2008, 11:38 PM
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/20/15131/15131_1208475516_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/20/15131/15131_1208475516_large.jpg)

After some opinion and suggestion i decide to pick sketch 3 and update it. Base 3d model of man and ready to sculpt in Zbrush

JoPu
04-18-2008, 06:57 PM
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/20/15131/15131_1208545020_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/20/15131/15131_1208545020_large.jpg)

3d Man Sculpt, still working with the clothing

JoPu
04-20-2008, 02:07 PM
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/20/15131/15131_1208700443_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/20/15131/15131_1208700443_large.jpg)

Alien quick coloring, comment are welcome, thanks

JoPu
04-24-2008, 11:43 PM
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/20/15131/15131_1209080585_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/20/15131/15131_1209080585_large.jpg)

Alien Color Test

Fetus23
04-25-2008, 01:07 AM
Hey Joko, I like the new color direction you've taken with this character. Its come a long way since the base mesh! You've got a good idea here, keep at it!


-love

JoPu
04-25-2008, 01:19 AM
Hi,
Thank you for your comment Fetus23, actually for texturing i need a long time to make color decision. I'm still need a lot of practice for texturing.:)

JoPu
04-25-2008, 02:42 PM
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/20/15131/15131_1209134569_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/20/15131/15131_1209134569_large.jpg)

I think i will use the second color alien (not much time left 17 days left). The Alien was base on human body, snake for the head, octopus tentacle and crocodile tail for the hand.

This is structures model for the background, add little modification from the sketch. 3d model created in wings 3D.
(Sorry for my English)

JoPu
04-26-2008, 12:27 AM
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/20/15131/15131_1209169675_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/20/15131/15131_1209169675_large.jpg)

Table and chair design idea

mdavid
04-26-2008, 01:06 AM
I am amazed by your beautiful work on the alien, and now the furniture is coming along very well too. One thought about the human - his hands look just a little bit small.

I love the way you are designing the furniture and the overall look of everything, and the red colouring for the alien looks brilliant :thumbsup:

JoPu
04-26-2008, 01:19 AM
Hi Mdavid,
Thanks for coming by, you are right about the hand, i will fix it soon, i'm still working with the human cloth and alien armor now. After the cloth and armor done i'll gonna working with human anatomy and detail also coloring.

Oh ya, your bigfoot dude looks better now.

JoPu
04-27-2008, 10:59 PM
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/20/15131/15131_1209337178_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/20/15131/15131_1209337178_large.jpg)

Cloth base model and 3d model posing. Still working on chess and wall modeling

JoPu
04-30-2008, 12:18 AM
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/20/15131/15131_1209514711_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/20/15131/15131_1209514711_large.jpg)

Wall and Cloth sculpt, change the background because i decide to render my final image in Zbrush to capture all the detail and there is not much time left (13 days more)

JoPu
05-01-2008, 02:49 AM
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/20/15131/15131_1209610184_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/20/15131/15131_1209610184_large.jpg)

3D Model

Ferx
05-01-2008, 03:21 AM
Hey Joko, really cool concept, very interesting, I really liked your approach to the challenge subject, great! The design and model for the alien are awesome, the furniture is great and cool outfit for the human :D Great work Joko and waiting for more updates :) Cheers mate! :beer:

JoPu
05-01-2008, 03:39 AM
Thanks Ferx for your very kind words;), Looking forward to see your challenge thread progress too.
Cheers mate:beer:

mdavid
05-02-2008, 02:17 AM
Fantastic updates. It's great to see this coming together so well

JoPu
05-03-2008, 03:02 AM
Thanks Mdavid

JoPu
05-03-2008, 03:03 AM
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/20/15131/15131_1209783801_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/20/15131/15131_1209783801_large.jpg)

Cloth Color test, and some detailing

JoPu
05-05-2008, 04:42 AM
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/20/15131/15131_1209962563_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/20/15131/15131_1209962563_large.jpg)

Hi, this my update. Armor base mesh, ready to sculpt in zbrush, Wall or background detail and color test, Furniture Detailing.

Crits are welcome,
Thanks.

cobaltblue
05-05-2008, 06:19 AM
I like the anatomy of the alien, but I think the head is a liitle small? just my opinion.
Goodluck!, can't wait to see your final piece. :)

JoPu
05-05-2008, 12:58 PM
Thanks Cobaltblue for your kind words

JoPu
05-07-2008, 12:58 AM
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/20/15131/15131_1210121881_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/20/15131/15131_1210121881_large.jpg)

My Update,

For the Chess games i use guide from
http://homepage.ntlworld.com/adam.bozon/
(advance puzzle 3 and 11)
Thanks and credit to Adam Bozon for the chess puzzle.

Donglu-LittleFish
05-07-2008, 02:08 AM
Hi Jopu, I really like how the design elements on the alien echo with those on the wall and chair, it makes the overall look of your image very consistent and uniformized! You are very fast, give it a push, I am sure you can finish it on time! All the best! :arteest:

JackZhang
05-07-2008, 02:29 AM
just hang on there buddy. you're almost there! dont' worry about the comment i made on the extension thing. it doesn't point to any individual. and you are not the only one want extension. personally i want it too :P

I hope you learnt a lot from this challenge. Looking forward to have you again in the next one. I respect you no less than the rest of the competitors~

JoPu
05-08-2008, 02:04 AM
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/20/15131/15131_1210212266_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/20/15131/15131_1210212266_large.jpg)

My Next Update, Next work to sculpt the hair and eyebrows, ready add more detail to the face.

JoPu
05-08-2008, 02:10 AM
Donglu-LittleFish: Thanks Donglu, try my best to finish the challenge:)

JackZhang: Thanks for your kind words Jack, ha ha ha you want the extension too Huh? but your comment about extension is wright, if you do some design to your client and you not finish the design on time or like you promise your client will be piss and give less respect to you as an artist wright? Yeah learn a lot from this challenge.:)

JoPu
05-10-2008, 08:00 PM
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/20/15131/15131_1210449622_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/20/15131/15131_1210449622_large.jpg)

My Detail Update On Human and Flor, coloring the human 80% complete

JoPu
05-11-2008, 11:45 PM
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/20/15131/15131_1210549553_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/20/15131/15131_1210549553_large.jpg)

Software: ZBrush

This Is my Upload for open category modeling.

First upload : Alien Modeling

Play Video >> (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/uplift_universe/player.php?entry_id=90555)

JoPu
05-11-2008, 11:57 PM
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/20/15131/15131_1210550220_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/20/15131/15131_1210550220_large.jpg)

Software: ZBrush

This Is my Upload for open category modeling.

First upload : Alien Modeling and armor

Play Video >> (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/uplift_universe/player.php?entry_id=90559)

JoPu
05-12-2008, 12:03 AM
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/20/15131/15131_1210550592_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/20/15131/15131_1210550592_large.jpg)

Software: ZBrush

This Is my Upload for open category modeling.

upload : Man Head

Play Video >> (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/uplift_universe/player.php?entry_id=90561)

JoPu
05-12-2008, 12:07 AM
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/20/15131/15131_1210550863_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/20/15131/15131_1210550863_large.jpg)

Software: ZBrush

This Is my Upload for open category modeling.

upload : Man Head

Play Video >> (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/uplift_universe/player.php?entry_id=90563)

JoPu
05-12-2008, 12:13 AM
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/20/15131/15131_1210551226_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/20/15131/15131_1210551226_large.jpg)

Software: ZBrush

This Is my Upload for open category modeling.

upload : Man head and clothing wireframe

Play Video >> (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/uplift_universe/player.php?entry_id=90564)

JoPu
05-12-2008, 12:20 AM
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/20/15131/15131_1210551613_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/20/15131/15131_1210551613_large.jpg)

Software: ZBrush

This Is my Upload for open category modeling.

upload : Furniture

Play Video >> (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/uplift_universe/player.php?entry_id=90566)

JoPu
05-12-2008, 12:26 AM
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/20/15131/15131_1210551987_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/20/15131/15131_1210551987_large.jpg)

Software: ZBrush

This Is my Upload for open category modeling.

upload : Furniture

Play Video >> (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/uplift_universe/player.php?entry_id=90569)

JoPu
05-12-2008, 12:34 AM
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/20/15131/15131_1210552492_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/20/15131/15131_1210552492_large.jpg)

Software: ZBrush

This Is my Upload for open category modeling.

upload : Furniture

Play Video >> (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/uplift_universe/player.php?entry_id=90571)

JoPu
05-12-2008, 12:39 AM
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/20/15131/15131_1210552738_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/20/15131/15131_1210552738_large.jpg)

Software: ZBrush

This Is my Upload for open category modeling.

upload : Furniture

Play Video >> (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/uplift_universe/player.php?entry_id=90572)

JoPu
05-12-2008, 08:05 AM
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/20/15131/15131_1210579530_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/20/15131/15131_1210579530_large.jpg)

Humans met aliens, exchanging knowledge and culture. Among the knowledge and culture humans gave, aliens enjoy "chess" most. Chess became extremely popular in their planet. All aliens are competing to be the best chess players; even humans- the original creator of chess game- are now in tough competition with aliens. Humans feel that they must beat aliens in chess for it is theirs; they must win their pride back!

So humans challenge aliens to decide who should be "The Ultimate Chess Grand Master". Therefore, chess games with high-levelled strategy among planets starts...

My final images, thanks for everyone that give a comment, crits and support on my wip thread. I learned a lot from this challenge, thank you

JoPu
05-13-2008, 09:55 AM
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/20/15131/15131_1210672509_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/20/15131/15131_1210672509_large.jpg)

Software: ZBrush

My Alien Armor Fix turntable

Play Video >> (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/uplift_universe/player.php?entry_id=90862)

JoPu
05-13-2008, 10:00 AM
http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/20/15131/15131_1210672834_medium.jpg (http://assets.cgsociety.org/challenge/entries/20/15131/15131_1210672834_large.jpg)

Humans met aliens, exchanging knowledge and culture. Among the knowledge and culture humans gave, aliens enjoy "chess" most. Chess became extremely popular in their planet. All aliens are competing to be the best chess players; even humans- the original creator of chess game- are now in tough competition with aliens. Humans feel that they must beat aliens in chess for it is theirs; they must win their pride back!

So humans challenge aliens to decide who should be "The Ultimate Chess Grand Master". Therefore, chess games with high-levelled strategy among planets starts...

My final images fix, thanks for everyone that give a comment, crits and support on my wip thread. I learned a lot from this challenge, thank you

cobaltblue
05-14-2008, 01:34 AM
congrats! the final piece turned out really well! i like the color scheme very much among other things.

Ferx
05-14-2008, 02:11 AM
Hey Joko, cool image!! Like a lot the iconic composition on your image. Great design on the alien chess master, great!! And the human suits are really nice. Congrats for this nice image!! And time for cold beers!! Cheers mate! :beer:

JoPu
05-14-2008, 03:41 PM
Cobaltblue: Thanks, glad you like the color, like your style in your portfolio:)

Ferx: Thanks, your thread is cool too, good luck with judging:beer:

Pegahoul
05-14-2008, 05:05 PM
all is nice, except... no shadow? ^^
really great modelling though, and the compo is nice

JoPu
05-15-2008, 02:24 AM
Thanks Pegahoul, there is a shadow, but a little shadow, if you look below the alien hand there is a shadow, and other part like chair corner.

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