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http://www.futurmedia.com/~jauper/pdiseno%203d/idiseno3d/Vacaciones.jpg
This is a beach of Palma de Mallorca. The scene recreates a day of vacations. It wanted to make a scene glad, with good memories...
Modeled with 3Ds Max 5 and Vray
greetings
Jaca
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torbjorn
05-09-2003, 02:05 PM
I can't belive no one has repiled on this yet??!!! This looks real good! The only crit i have at the moment is the table. There's something wrong with the surface. Where the basket throws a shadow, you can see that the wodden pieces are apart from eachother (which is good) but then there is solid wood all of a sudden?!!
Great job!
/T.
Carina
05-09-2003, 02:16 PM
It looks very nice!
My one crit is:
The image in the background is as blurred up front as it is further away.. This mkes it look like you've just stuck an image on a plane and used it as a background (which of course is probably what you've done;))
Try and see if you can make the far away parts of the background image more blurry, and the closeup ones less blurry.. or something.
just my 2p
protohype
05-09-2003, 02:25 PM
Juicy image! I love it!
Those cups and plates remind me of the ones I bought at IKEA a while ago.
I also agree with Carina. If the background image was blurred more in the background it would give the image more depth.
Thanks for the post!
daybe
05-09-2003, 02:34 PM
This a great image, the dof is fine by me and actually it is probably pretty accurate. My only comment would be the the wood texture for the table and chairs seems to be a bit off, tend to look like plastic, a little tweaking and this image will be perfect.
Dave
Ingunn
05-09-2003, 02:39 PM
Agree about the background, but this looks really nice!!!
:buttrock:
R.L.M
05-09-2003, 05:53 PM
WOW!! really really good!
torbjorn, i thing you didn't understand the table shape..
the apart pieces are in all the middle, this is how the table build..
very good.. i love it! :applause:
tonpe
05-09-2003, 06:50 PM
Hey jaca ,como ya te dije en su dia en otro foro tu imagen esta para comersela,es una alegria verte por aqui,me encanta tu imagen,que tengas suerte.
un saludo;) :bounce: :bounce:
Soterialive
05-12-2003, 08:01 PM
I really appreciate this work! Very well done, I like your attention to detail as I see the chiquita banana sticker on the banana and the rust stain below the iron gate indicating wear.
on the other hand, I am not sure what the deal is with the table paradox you got goin there in the way the wood is arranged and like previously stated, the background is entirely blurry instead of having levels of blurriness.
Overall excellent!, I wish I were there instead of posting this reply here!!
torbjorn
05-13-2003, 07:57 AM
Originally posted by R.L.M
WOW!! really really good!
torbjorn, i thing you didn't understand the table shape..
the apart pieces are in all the middle, this is how the table build..
very good.. i love it! :applause:
i figured that was the case :)
Thanks!
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