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Werner
05-09-2003, 12:53 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/galleryimages/219/rave_girl_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/galleryimages/219/rave_girl.jpg)

Title: End Of The Line, Werner (3D)
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Let me know how I can improve.
Thanks
image (http://3dluvr.com/ziemdesign/images/rave_girl.jpg)

oxygen_77
05-09-2003, 12:56 PM
Beautiful image!! Great work on the lips! The only thing I don't like is the colour of the bracelets on the right wrist... great otherwise!

wgreenlee1
05-09-2003, 12:56 PM
OMG!!
This is fantasic stuff!!!

MORE!!!!MORE!!!:bounce:

xtrm3d
05-09-2003, 01:03 PM
:beer: :beer:
bravvvvoooooo !!!

really front page quality....
i give you 5 star !!!!

but have to agree that i stoo dont like the color of the bracelet ..

MrWyatt
05-09-2003, 01:08 PM
as you mentioned the elbows are not that good, but over all: beatifull work indeed.
respect.
:applause:

robinson
05-09-2003, 01:08 PM
IMPROVE ?
Where, there is not to much ? :thumbsup:
The modeling is great, "the cloth, damn give us somemore info"
The texturing is great too, I would work on the skin texture, the texture looks great on the head but there is just something wrong on her arms (specularity and glossiness).


Is it Irene from NT ?

Miyazaki
05-09-2003, 01:10 PM
Front page, front page :bounce:

Facial Deluxe
05-09-2003, 01:42 PM
Excellent awesome work !!!! Show us more renders please !!!!

Facial Deluxe
05-09-2003, 01:54 PM
...and wires, and specs, and.....

proton
05-09-2003, 01:57 PM
PLEASE send this to me for teh gallery.....I think this would make a great LW ad :bounce:

also send in to Expose.....it has to be in that book!

anieves
05-09-2003, 01:58 PM
very nice, I too wanna see some wires

Werner
05-09-2003, 02:10 PM
Thanks for the comments guys :beer:

robinson : the cloth was done with a gradient set to incidence angle, in the color slot. Nothing special :-) I added a 500 um crumple procederal texture in the bump slot.

proton : I will send it to you as soon as I'm done with the background and elbow changes. I'm also busy with a radiosity render to see what it looks like. It should be done early next week. :thumbsup: Hey, have you seen this site, proton?
http://www.grafx.co.za
We are trying to get more people in South Africa, to realise that Maya is not the only 3d application ever written. :-)

Facial Deluxe: cool, I'll post more angles, wires and close-ups soon.

The more I look at it, the more I want to change her pants....or not change them, but rather model the pockets in stead of using bump maps.

Chewey
05-09-2003, 02:16 PM
Very nice work! Maybe the specular highlight on the right arm is a bit too hot.
The right index finger that touches her face appears of be a bit double jointed as it bends a bit unnaturally backwards.
The folds in her top blouse material tend to give the appearance of folding down to her right and away from gravity as if a wind is blowing at it yet the white fur appears unnaffected. The pant bump texture looks a bit smeared, i.e. the right pocket opening. The rim lit portion of the left breast peekaboo effect makes the blouse appear more see through on the left side and hardly at all on the right portion of the blouse.

:thumbsup:

dzogchen
05-09-2003, 02:40 PM
This is stunning work!:thumbsup:

Limbus
05-09-2003, 02:56 PM
Originally posted by Werner

Let me know how I can improve.
Thanks

Great modell and texture:buttrock: :beer: :buttrock: Only Critt: the skin on the arms is a little too shiny.

Limbus

MattClary
05-09-2003, 03:20 PM
She looks great! Love the headband!

dies-irae
05-09-2003, 03:20 PM
"improve"...
i dont really see how much could be improved!

really impressive work.
the clothing is somewhat finalfantasy-esque, i really dig it!
the model is great and the render awesome!

front page, front page, front page!!

Chagidiel
05-09-2003, 03:21 PM
VERY good!!! :airguitar

Agree with chewie about the blouse. Regarding the pants I suggest you just skip the pockets. Isnīt it reasonable to think clubby ravers buy hyper-designed clothes with low comfort & functionability and donīt care so much about things as pockets? ;) Otherwise I think the bumpmap on the pants is perfect.

Another thing about the blose; I suggest you take a look at how the folds and wrinkles appear "Y-wise". I think you should adjust the folding up and down to correspond better with the depth/width-folding. As it is now, it almost appear as one curved edge.
Hope you get my point :)

Looking forward to seeing this in Expose! Great job :scream:

gase3924
05-09-2003, 03:26 PM
WOW WOW WOW...
man you are the best:bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown:
i am getting in love with this girl:)

Eugeny
05-09-2003, 05:29 PM
Excellent :thumbsup:
Why u not posting this image on Gallery Finished works too ? - it's mast be on header ...

LNT
05-09-2003, 06:50 PM
looks great!

the only problem I see is the skin shader/shadow on her arms and belly...it looks like sasquatch shadow has its way with it (I know it did on my girl here (http://www.3dluvr.com/lnt/images/LoveGirl01jpg.jpg) and I could never have full control over it's appearance

but your work has that little touch of reality to it that I really like - especially her gloves material

adrencg
05-09-2003, 07:09 PM
get her clothes off!!!!

leigh
05-09-2003, 07:34 PM
Heya Werner :D

Ek het jou email gekry met hierdie pic - baie fokken lekker! :D
Ek sal nou probeer om my nie-so-goed afrikaans te praat, want ek het nie n kans om die taal te spreek deesdae nie... hehehehe...
Hmmm... ek dink dat die vel (sp?) het n bietjie werk nog nodig - die kleure is nie 100% reg nie. En miskien kan jy gradients gebruik om 'n bietjie fake SSS to kry. Daar is ook 'n bietjie oversaturation of haar vel - hoe veel is jou diffusion?
Oh, die textures op die handsakke is baie cool :thumbsup:
Baie cool modelling ook :thumbsup:

Suidafrika ROCKS :buttrock:

Oh, en kyk vinnig op die eerste bladsye van cgtalk, ek hie hierdie thread daarop geplug ;)

katon
05-09-2003, 08:06 PM
wow!!!:thumbsup:
i just have so much to learn. this is truly amazing. you guys just inspire so many of us. this is great. keep it up!:applause:

Facial Deluxe
05-09-2003, 08:14 PM
Mmmmh, still no wires around......
(yes, some of us are more impatient than others...)

dominicqwek
05-09-2003, 08:15 PM
Damn! This is good!!! Im fine with the bracelets, in fact i think they compliment the shades and lightwave logo on the scarf. Is that sasqatch?

:drool:

Black Rain
05-09-2003, 08:16 PM
Originally posted by Leigh
baie fokken lekker! :D


:beer:
ja ek ook oh damn i cant remember anything i learnt in school :) . nice to see other south africans here that do really nice work.

btw Very nice render boet :applause:

ceql
05-09-2003, 08:21 PM
Wow! That's awesome!! :applause: :applause: :beer:

robin
05-09-2003, 08:35 PM
Werner

Woooow !!!! your Lightwave skills improved a lot since the last time i saw your work .....

this is Top-gun 3D



:surprised :surprised :surprised :surprised :surprised :surprised :surprised

robinson
05-09-2003, 08:41 PM
finally the front page :thumbsup::bounce:

CTRL+X
05-09-2003, 08:44 PM
Love the cloth, you can almost feel the texture just with visual clues only, texture on the headband is great, I love the way the blouse just flows over her.

Whats her name ??

samartin
05-09-2003, 08:46 PM
gotta say that it was pretty obvious that it would make the front page... top job :applause:

PS. someone earlier did mention funny elbows, with that sorted there would be nothing to improve upon...

3DKnight
05-09-2003, 08:48 PM
nice!

the forearms are a little too shiny i think...

Morbid Angel
05-09-2003, 08:49 PM
hay nice work...i got one suggestion...as detailed as everything else is, the arms seem to be lacking some detail ie muscule definition.
But other then that great work.

CGmonkey
05-09-2003, 08:51 PM
Awesome render!

Scandell
05-09-2003, 09:01 PM
quite a stunning piece...she looks very unique

jfalconer
05-09-2003, 09:08 PM
Is it just me, or does her head look a little too big for her body?

I don't know, it looks so great I don't know if I am going crazy here... nevermind...

dark_lotus
05-09-2003, 09:12 PM
Thats really nice!

Great Stuff.

Kid-Mesh
05-09-2003, 09:15 PM
Holy Renders Batman, Are my Eyes deceiving me? AWESOME :buttrock:

raden
05-09-2003, 09:17 PM
:buttrock: :buttrock:

Excellent render Werner!
Everything looks perfect, almost. Her blouse/headband/glove shading is just awesome.

Crits for improvement?
Hmm if I can nitpick I would point :
1. The bump on her pants. If its made by leather should have some thickness , then the wrinkles wouldnt be that sharp.
2. Her arms joints. More definition, the muscles & bone.
3. If this isnt for LW promo, the yellow logo can go ;)


Post more.

:beer:

xynaria
05-09-2003, 09:24 PM
If it hadn't have been put on the front page, I'd have missed this....hope you sling it in the gallery when you're happier with it. :):beer:

cutepixie
05-09-2003, 09:31 PM
AWESOME ...dont like braclets but what the heck the rest of the image makes up for it :D five stars *****:thumbsup:

Geckopunk83
05-09-2003, 09:31 PM
:applause:
between this work and your semi-goth girl...hooooly crap you rule


the onlything i can think of about this current work is the lips could use some detail like bump

MadS
05-09-2003, 09:59 PM
While technically, it's very good, I can't help but notice that she has a very emotionless expression on her face. I think it would be nice to see some sort of pose or expression that adds character. Maybe have an eyebrow raised and a slight grin or something, I dunno... oh and the skin looks plastic-y.

Great model!

iBlue
05-09-2003, 10:01 PM
:drool:

deddy
05-09-2003, 10:03 PM
wow great work ...
the weighting so smooth
sometimes i wonder how you guys go a good weigthing.
any tips??
I'll appreciate it..

mv
05-09-2003, 10:21 PM
Excellent work! I especially like the gloves and the lips.:thumbsup:

robkoni
05-09-2003, 10:30 PM
Very nice work:bounce: ,Congrats,but some wireswould be nice:thumbsup:
and how long did she take(doing my first Photoreal person,in between jobs as we speak):beer:
All the best Robin

xerozz
05-09-2003, 10:31 PM
she is ****in hott!:eek:

Gremlin
05-09-2003, 10:37 PM
awesome stuff!!
Really showin' off what lightwave can do... sometimes I wish I started on lightwave, becaues after 2years of max and maya, Lightwave is so counter-intuitive.
Cheers,
:beer:

Hmura
05-09-2003, 11:21 PM
WOW great model !!!
Can you pls post some wires? Nice work.

Dearmad
05-09-2003, 11:26 PM
I like the bracelets.

You already know this by now- but that is a really good model, goo dtexturing, and overall NICE pic.

cgtalkmember
05-09-2003, 11:27 PM
very nice indeed

eezie
05-09-2003, 11:40 PM
this is hot... so very hot. nice lips, nic eyes/eyebrows.. this is bananas. the only thing i'd change is maybe make the bracelet the same color as the glasses.. or something...

this is really reall reall nice. :drool:

eezie
05-09-2003, 11:47 PM
wireframes?!

InnerVortex
05-09-2003, 11:58 PM
HMOJ!!!!!11*
This is tottally sweetawsomefullpretty, and in the words of eezie "hot"!!!!1



*Holy Mother Of Jesus

edit: this is so sweet that ill save it in diferent directories in my camputer, and use it as background with a "oWn4g3" tag on top of it

pencil-head
05-10-2003, 12:16 AM
mmmmmmm, sexy cg lady :drool:

r2d3
05-10-2003, 12:27 AM
prachtig model
hopelijk kunnen we wires zien :drool:

btw ik hou van dat zuid-afrikaans taaltje (ik hoop dat jullie dit kunnen lezen ;) )

Maximus Groff
05-10-2003, 12:27 AM
Awesome! How much time on this work ?

xasteycracker
05-10-2003, 12:31 AM
Great work. but the braclets look like they are see through.were you going fo this. any way great work :drool: :bowdown:

koinu
05-10-2003, 12:37 AM
I QUIT>>>>>>>>>>>> Se ya guys at Mcdonald's, oh by the way "Would you like that Super-sized?"
Radical work, now only if i can get this P2 to generate stuff that!!!! awesome.....Truely Awesome
:thumbsup: :bounce: :applause: :drool: :drool: :drool:

AVTPro
05-10-2003, 12:45 AM
Can I get her phone number?

Garma
05-10-2003, 12:50 AM
... (e.g. the silence of respect for beauty)

oxyg3n
05-10-2003, 12:52 AM
Wow this is really nice work.

The only thing I can think of at the moment is the shirt/blouse seems like it should have some bump on it.

erikals
05-10-2003, 12:54 AM
Beautiful :wip:

That's neat :) I like the lighting setup a lot, and the way you color the shadows. Can you tell us more about how you did it?

(I think that the elbows needs to changed to be more "pointy")

Very nice, can't wait to see more
Like your website design a lot.
Erik

Kroax
05-10-2003, 12:58 AM
cool man

BnE
05-10-2003, 01:02 AM
yeaaaaaaaaaaaaaah
i love it!!!!!!! i love the lighting, i love everything!!!!
:bounce: :bounce: :bounce: :scream:

malcolmvexxed
05-10-2003, 01:20 AM
Great work but I don't think that the pose of her arms and upper body (pretty relaxed) match the pose of her hips and upper legs, which seem... a little more unnatrual and forced

DAREONER
05-10-2003, 01:24 AM
good:thumbsup:

energie_r
05-10-2003, 01:26 AM
very nice!

Eeyow
05-10-2003, 01:40 AM
The head is too large.

PolyMangler
05-10-2003, 02:27 AM
wow great stuff, no crits here other then what's been mentioned

:thumbsup:

ansonkit
05-10-2003, 02:32 AM
great, nice pose too...

but why ur model face look like the one in a book "Inside Lightwave" r u remodelling the same figure.

but anyway, is a good design...nice nice nice...

arjun
05-10-2003, 03:51 AM
She looks EXACTLY like Dr. Jean Gray from Xmen. It looks fantastic :eek:

Mike RB
05-10-2003, 05:00 AM
Well done. Great work on the lighting.

Mike

pearson
05-10-2003, 05:07 AM
Looks very nice! Where's the wire? :bounce: Pleeaasee! :drool:

Rey
05-10-2003, 05:30 AM
:applause:
wow

lerpiedood
05-10-2003, 05:57 AM
Great Job! Excelent image! Though I think the pants could use a bit of work, hair as well.

E_Moelzer
05-10-2003, 06:33 AM
Great Job!
Very good modeling and surfacing as well as posing, ah everything is great!
I liked her better when she was more gothy though, but this is only personal preference
;)
CU
Elmar

facial
05-10-2003, 06:39 AM
No comments here :D

onlooker
05-10-2003, 06:41 AM
I'd like to see a wire, and maybe a short explination on the techniques used.

Is there a real life model, did you draw an original model first. did you use image plains? You know just a short explination.

Nevertheless she is fantastic,:applause: and beautiful. :love:

Love the cloth.:thumbsup:

shaangfx
05-10-2003, 07:43 AM
i like the gesture and delicate body u tried to show!
preety detailed..and i guys it look amazing with some composited backgound..! specially sunlight if she is wearing glares...

keep it comin..!;)

jason-slab
05-10-2003, 07:47 AM
yeah very nice

pity about the lw logo, but thats just me

great model though, goood to C SA folks doing such good work

l8r

|jason

rayz
05-10-2003, 08:07 AM
face looks amazing!............ cant wait to see this finished.

keep it up!:beer:

PureFire
05-10-2003, 08:44 AM
shes gorgeous...simply gorgeous!!!!:xtreme: :xtreme:

eugene_fraxby
05-10-2003, 08:55 AM
great work, all the shader owns....

but i prefered her as a goth :drool:

http://www.3dluvr.com/9XiF1052550966m/ziemdesign/images/G-girl1.jpg

leigh
05-10-2003, 09:15 AM
It's weird, in that goth pic she almost looks like a cross between Cameron Dias and Angelina Jolie :D

vanilla shotgun
05-10-2003, 10:23 AM
:eek:

I LOVE the lips, (and the lether)!:drool: :drool: :drool:

spworks
05-10-2003, 12:32 PM
pretty women~
Good job :applause:

ee01akk2
05-10-2003, 12:46 PM
<comment removed by moderator>

Watch your lanuage.

Clave
05-10-2003, 12:46 PM
Agreed, it is excellent work! :eek: :thumbsup:

Nima-3dman
05-10-2003, 12:58 PM
wow, pretty ,cool ,....
Please show us the wire. nice cloths ...:thumbsup:

Is-boset
05-10-2003, 02:00 PM
great. but i want to see a wire frame, can't be real!:D

ZVAN
05-10-2003, 02:16 PM
very great work.. really perfect.. yea.. the bracelet is translucent i see.. but can be improve to match the whole scene.. =)

eddy-3ddy
05-10-2003, 02:32 PM
Great work werner, long time no see.:applause:

Nemoid
05-10-2003, 03:26 PM
i want ther number too!!!

:drool:

(hey a bit SSS in the skin as well as more imperfections in the texture willl make her even more realistic!!!)

Leave Lw logo exactly where it is.:thumbsup:

khaleghi
05-10-2003, 03:42 PM
I love your cloth modeling.:love:
pretty one:bounce: :bounce:

Raphael-Lacoste
05-10-2003, 04:55 PM
what the f... quick ass awsome chick!

Book
05-10-2003, 05:08 PM
Really excellent work. You're 100% there in most areas, but a couple of crits if ya want 'em:

1. The arms and the exposed shoulder need some more definition and structure. If you isolate these areas they lack the same care as the rest of the model. In the forearms, it's not just the elbows, but try to define the muscles under the skin. In the shoulder, give a hint of the clavicle and define the deltoid a little more - both of these are very evident in model body-types, and should result in the shoulder looking less like a round ball shape.

2. The skin on the face is awesome. The skin on the arms does look too shiny, as some have mentioned, and needs some mapping to break up the perfection of it.

Really excellent work. It's great.

Also I'd lose the Lightwave logo. It seems to cheapen it a bit. Unless of course they're paying ya for this...

cybernaut
05-10-2003, 05:10 PM
Absolutely Amazing. I'm in awe!!!!:eek:

KOKE
05-10-2003, 06:01 PM
The model rocks!!

can I have a date with her???

:bounce: :bounce: :drool:

breaver
05-10-2003, 06:22 PM
Hey Werner Love it man your model is absolutely awesome ,love the textures.I am glad we South Africans are displaying our talent out there.:applause:

Nightwing
05-10-2003, 06:25 PM
wooooah :applause:

Uitstekende werk man, ek onthou toe ek die goth version gesien het was ek baie beindruk, maar nou het jy 'n heeltemal ander "look" gevolg vir haar gesig en klere. Hou nog altyd van die leer broek.....and now I'm starting to struggle with Afrikaans as well :)

Great job overall, would love to see some close-up renders of her face, those lips are seriously smooch-worthy :love:

Izu
05-10-2003, 06:38 PM
Really nice....like everyone else already said...but itīs true....only thing i could really crit right now is the skin texture....it looks kind of glossy and smoothe to me...i mean itīs like smoothe leather...and thatīs not really what skin looks like...but overall really nice...good on ya' :beer:

Plasticbag
05-10-2003, 07:34 PM
omg! its Lightwave at work!

mindrot
05-10-2003, 08:07 PM
way cool man. Great to see aa few more fellow South Africans here at CGTalk... :beer:

peterpro
05-10-2003, 10:52 PM
did you use motion designer to create the shirt?
=)

pete

PvtRyan
05-10-2003, 11:02 PM
Awesome! She reminds me of Kate Archer of the No One Lives Forever game :)

lebada
05-10-2003, 11:34 PM
whoever said sex doesnt sell is dumb...can i have her? here's all my money:drool: *hands out the $$$*

jtk77
05-11-2003, 01:38 AM
the skin on the arms especialy, looks like metal, not skin.
I'd try to get a softness there, some kind of saturation of light rather than the shine. The bracletts are odd.
nice layout and mood. I like her glasses and hair a lot. sexy

dbissell
05-11-2003, 04:04 AM
Very nice work!

The only thing that really stands out to me as awk is the Right Hand Index Finger that presses against the face. The bend in the top most joint of that finger doesn't seem right. I tried the pose on my own face and to get it like the picture I had to press my finger tip against the cheek. This pressure gives an indentation on my face. I don't know if adding this indentation or changing the finger pose would help with this awk problem?

-Dan

raine
05-11-2003, 07:03 AM
Very nice work!! ... I too would also like to see some wires :)

iBlue
05-11-2003, 07:15 AM
So when is this going in the gallery :cool:

goodlag
05-11-2003, 08:02 AM
Really excellent work:thumbsup:

Vash T Stampede
05-11-2003, 12:55 PM
WOOOWWW !!

:eek:

erilaz
05-11-2003, 01:23 PM
I don't want to sound cliche, but this is brilliant.:eek:

pblacklock
05-11-2003, 03:24 PM
Great job. only three things to fix:

left breast is flatter than the right one or seems so anyway, less hi-beams than the right one ;)

finger on cheek is wrong.

and the right forearm has too much brightness on it.

but those are only small details to fix. i love the overall look of her, great job!!

:bounce: tutorials please.

from all of us wavers.
WE SALUTE YOU:buttrock:

v3rtex
05-11-2003, 09:35 PM
Absolutely awesome.

hithet
05-12-2003, 06:58 AM
hello!
Werner!

You are great LW artist !
I am D-STORM,Inc's support of LW,my name is Felix!
Would u like to send this pic to me for D_STORM gallery?

I could introduce u to Chinese LWers!

my mail:
ye@hithet.com

wait u reply!
Felix!

Chabee
05-12-2003, 08:19 AM
:eek: wow, very good!!! :applause:

Werner
05-12-2003, 10:01 AM
Wow, thank you all soooo much for the cool comments and crits! :beer:

I will go through all the comments and try to fix all the little problems. I've updated the image on the first page of the thread, with a couple of changes...the Lightwave logo stays...sorry guys, and I'm not getting any money for this.

Leigh, jy is 'n ster! Baie dankie dat jy die image ge-plug het! :love:
O, jou Afrikaans is baie goed, en ek kon alles verstaan!

It's good to see more and more South African people here.

Here are a couple of quick wire shots...nothing spectacular.

wire (http://www.3dluvr.com/ziemdesign/images/extra/2dwip/wire1.jpg)
wire 2 (http://www.3dluvr.com/ziemdesign/images/extra/2dwip/wire2.jpg)
wire 3 (http://www.3dluvr.com/ziemdesign/images/extra/2dwip/wire3.jpg)
smooth 1 (http://www.3dluvr.com/ziemdesign/images/extra/2dwip/smooth1.jpg)
smooth2 (http://www.3dluvr.com/ziemdesign/images/extra/2dwip/smooth2.jpg)

http://www.3dluvr.com/9YeF1052750711q/ziemdesign/images/extra/2dwip/wire2.jpg

anieves
05-12-2003, 02:24 PM
nice clean mesh Werner, very nice.

jason-slab
05-12-2003, 03:03 PM
l00kin really good:thumbsup: :thumbsup:

only thing still buggin me[besides the *cough*lw*cough*cough**logo*], is the smoothness of the bottom of her top, needs a hem me thinks


|jason

tmcbroome
05-12-2003, 03:04 PM
I can only echo all the good things already said. Great work... the whole image has a wonderful soft feel. She has a certain amount of "life" that is so often missing. Thank you for sharing your work.

JohnD
05-12-2003, 03:27 PM
Awesome work. Glad to see some Lightwave work up on the front page. As for the bracelets, they look like those amber jewelery you see around. All in all, great. I definitely agree with Proton. This image should definitely be in some ads or books or something.

Prototype3X
05-12-2003, 03:30 PM
HOT! Very nice stuff

fester
05-12-2003, 04:03 PM
Werner -

beautiful work. very inspiring. excellent cloth work - actually all the texturing is incredible. as others have said, it's great to see some lightwave work of this caliber hit the front page.

I'd love it if you could share your surface for the leather pants.

Keep up the great work.

J. Epp (Moksha)
05-12-2003, 04:26 PM
Looks to me as if the left breastis squashed, there's no fabric overhang like the right. Anyway, i should keep my mind out of the gutter.

Obstlaney
05-12-2003, 07:57 PM
smells poser, dunnit ? yes i see the logo.
avatar looks poser too.
sorry if im wrong.

Werner
05-13-2003, 09:13 AM
Originally posted by Obstlaney
smells poser, dunnit ? yes i see the logo.
avatar looks poser too.
sorry if im wrong.

lol...something wrong with your nose mate!

lildragon
05-13-2003, 03:34 PM
You've done it again buddy, she's beautiful! I especially love the cloth, fur and lips ;). Nothing to add but she's one sexy CG Character, well done bud :thumbsup: and that's one clean mesh!

Please be sure to enter this into Expose http://www.cgtalk.com/expose you definitely have a chance

You have received the CGtalk choice award .Please feel free to display this image anywhere you like! Nice work.

upon receiving this award, it guarantees you a spot in the cgtalk gallery hall of fame (http://gallery.cgtalk.com) - which you are now placed

http://www.cgtalk.com/plug_award/cgtalk_award_may03.jpg

P.S. Please email me @ tito@cgnetworks.com for the award .psd file

salud

Werner
05-13-2003, 03:42 PM
Thank you soooo much lildragon! :beer:

I'll send the image to Expose as soon as I'm done with a couple of fixes.

man, I love this forum and all the wonderful people here. :love:

:buttrock: :buttrock: :buttrock:

robinson
05-13-2003, 03:44 PM
Congrats !!!

:thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup:

Werner
05-13-2003, 03:51 PM
Originally posted by robinson
Congrats !!!

:thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup:

Thanks robinson:beer:

proton
05-13-2003, 04:00 PM
Well deserved.....can't wait to see this in Expose.....

As soon as I get the image I will pitch it for some sort of LW advert.....might make a great image for the LW8 box:buttrock:

Werner
05-13-2003, 04:03 PM
Originally posted by proton
Well deserved.....can't wait to see this in Expose.....

As soon as I get the image I will pitch it for some sort of LW advert.....might make a great image for the LW8 box:buttrock:

:beer:

Djobouk
05-13-2003, 07:18 PM
Hello,

Very nice piece of work indeed. There are few things though that have not been mentioned yet which have been naging at me a little, if I may.

Her left hand knuckles seem awckward . The 3rd and 4th knuckle are quite inflated and smooth while the fifth feels rather bony and shrunk.
Another comment relates to her blouse texture. The top part of it reads like a smooth fleace-like material while it reads like a plastic bellow her breast line.
And while I am on the breast subject I will echo a previous comment about her left breast missing from the picture. After seeing the wiremesh I have to conclude it would just be a slight lighting issue.

Voila, my two cents. Hope I am not a pain and keep up the good work.

leigh
05-14-2003, 04:00 AM
Originally posted by Obstlaney
smells poser, dunnit ? yes i see the logo.
avatar looks poser too.
sorry if im wrong.

I know Werner, and I know this is a LW model. This guy DOESN'T use Poser, and this certainly doesn't look like one of Posers crap models.
That kind of comment really smacks of jealousy...

Nemoid
05-14-2003, 08:53 AM
Originally posted by Obstlaney
smells poser, dunnit ? yes i see the logo.
avatar looks poser too.
sorry if im wrong.

How can u say such a thing????
:shame:

open your eyes and take a look
at the wires!!!

Avatar rocks.

wgreenlee1
05-14-2003, 08:57 AM
:beer:


Yay Werner,you da man!!!!!!!!!:thumbsup:

RedSilas
05-15-2003, 04:41 AM
The girl looks awesome! Nice job!:eek:

fredconv
05-15-2003, 10:39 AM
:drool: :drool:

Want more ..... gimme gimme

bealobo
05-15-2003, 04:39 PM
Hi!
amazing work!
Iīve been reading the crits and so and...
DONĻT CHANGE THE PANTS!!!!
hehehehheh
I think you rather remove the pockets from the texture instead of model them, I think those pants are tight enough to have pockets, I mean, in a practical point of view... who could be able to put a hand inside the pocket in such a tight pants?

How did you make the clothes??? is it photoshop? or are the textures pure and simply LW??? I need to know... :surprised
hehhe did you use a shader?

:thumbsup: :applause::airguitar:

Bealobo

bealobo
05-15-2003, 04:40 PM
Hi!
amazing work!
Iīve been reading the crits and so and...
DONīT CHANGE THE PANTS!!!!
hehehehheh
I think you rather remove the pockets from the texture instead of model them, I think those pants are tight enough to have pockets, I mean, in a practical point of view... who could ever be able to put a hand inside the pocket in such a tight pants?

How did you make the clothes??? is it photoshop? or are the textures pure and simply LW??? I need to know... :surprised
hehhe did you use any shader?

:thumbsup: :applause::airguitar:

Bealobo
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Remi
05-27-2003, 08:56 PM
Originally posted by Obstlaney
smells poser, dunnit ? yes i see the logo.
avatar looks poser too.
sorry if im wrong.

Bad way to start your cgtalk experience pal....perhaps stop using poser and you'll be able to make something yourself.....

Great job Werner:thumbsup: :thumbsup: :)

proton
05-27-2003, 09:00 PM
I would take that as a compliment...Poser models are great models that have been developed over the years....I think Werners has a lot more character but that's just my take....:thumbsup:

Vojislav+Milanovic
05-27-2003, 09:32 PM
just a opinion:
Poser models are nice for references and anatomy research, however their geometry is pure crap. Only thing i liked in poser is sketch designer and it can be used for storyboarding for people that aren't so good with hand drawing.

oh, i'm going OT now, awesome work Werner:applause:

akademus

Werner
05-29-2003, 10:32 AM
Originally posted by proton
I would take that as a compliment...Poser models are great models that have been developed over the years....I think Werners has a lot more character but that's just my take....:thumbsup:



thanks proton :) :beer:

now, back to poser ;) LOL

wgreenlee1
05-29-2003, 10:41 AM
Originally posted by Werner
thanks proton :) :beer:

now, back to poser ;) LOL

LOL!:wip:

proton
05-29-2003, 03:39 PM
:applause:

robkoni
05-29-2003, 05:31 PM
Nice work Werner,I dont know what look your going for on the Textures,Photoreal or CG?(if Photoreal...well what you have is a start) very nice modelling too nice compact mesh,are you going to do a detailed version at some point:thumbsup:
Its not that hard to make a human.........however making her foxy,takes real talent.:applause:

Meshweaver
06-14-2003, 03:58 AM
I'd like to have a look at this but it seems as if all the images won't work :(

lildragon
06-14-2003, 12:27 PM
Just linked it from the gallery, take a look

-lild

Meshweaver
06-15-2003, 12:49 AM
very nice work! everything is nice and tidy and well optimised - nice job!

thanks for the links Lildragon :)

robin
06-15-2003, 02:10 AM
Totally s-p-le-n-d-i-d, well well done werner

B-e-a-u-t-i-f-u-l

:buttrock:

New
06-15-2003, 02:38 AM
O_O

jur

fantastic!

friedmike
06-24-2003, 06:59 PM
great model and lighting!

Her left hand is kinda strange though, maybe too boney?

Other than that, really nice!!

butchoi
09-24-2003, 06:54 AM
stunning dude!
show us more profile rendition ...
pleaseeeeee............

:drool: :applause: :applause:

_-_twiggy_-_
06-23-2005, 03:02 AM
Lol old thread but Wicked stuff!! \m/

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