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Engy
03-27-2008, 06:57 PM
Hi,
This is a photomanipulation I have been working on just for fun and to improve my photoshop skills. I think it needs a few tweaks and is lacking a little something, any help would be most appreciated.

Cheers,

http://features.cgsociety.org/gallerycrits/36119/36119_1206647759_large.jpg

CybrGfx
03-27-2008, 09:20 PM
He's too "cute," and he looks photoshopped.

If he's an old orc, he should be gnarled, and wrinkly, and battle scarred, possibly blind in one eye. His skin should look like an old dog with the mange, with patches of hair missing, a bit torn off one ear. One eye droops from being blindsided with a mug to the head in one of a hundred fights he's been in if he's been in one.

We're talking ORC here, not Shrek's city cousin.
I'd also darken the overall gamma on this one, like the smooth skinned, smiley orc, it's a bit too cheery for the character.

Good start, he's just an orc with a bit of an identity problem...

~Cyber

Engy
03-28-2008, 04:40 AM
Thanks man, thats exactly the feedback im looking for.

emorhconoM
03-29-2008, 02:11 PM
He's too "cute," and he looks photoshopped.

If he's an old orc, he should be gnarled, and wrinkly, and battle scarred, possibly blind in one eye. His skin should look like an old dog with the mange, with patches of hair missing, a bit torn off one ear. One eye droops from being blindsided with a mug to the head in one of a hundred fights he's been in if he's been in one.

We're talking ORC here, not Shrek's city cousin.
I'd also darken the overall gamma on this one, like the smooth skinned, smiley orc, it's a bit too cheery for the character.

Good start, he's just an orc with a bit of an identity problem...

~Cyber

A fact. He reminds me of Archie Bunker.

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