character: angel

[Baybeestar]

:applause: NICE! :) I think her left shoulder drops a bit too much maybe...and would like to see the wings on the outside of the frame ;) I really like that she is not the typical angel with a perfect skinny ass body! :thumbsup:

[mattregnier]

This is a great rendering, it's nice to see some 'fine' art on this board again, and not women with overly huge joobies and a butt to boot! I would love to see some more of your work, you have a good sense of composition and the volumes in the form are done very well. I do agree that the left shoulder could be tweaked, possibly try messing with it in photoshop since it looks like this was a scanned pencil/ink piece so you won't mess up the original work.

[requiem]

Very nice. your use of subtlety is what really makes this picture great. i love the air of innocence she has.
please post more work.

[dinfet]

glad you guys like it

http://shekinah.orcon.net.nz/images/yateambot.jpg
here is one that I did a little while ago

[dinfet]

http://shekinah.orcon.net.nz/images/badguy.jpg
http://shekinah.orcon.net.nz/images/DragonLady2.jpg
http://shekinah.orcon.net.nz/images/beast.jpg


a few more oldies

[k2tricky81]

I definatly see this as a great start to something incredible. Continue to keep drawing and i know that what we will see will be awesome.

Very good work, keep it up!

K2

[9th Legion]

wow, you've really got talent! I also agree on the shoulder thingie in your first pic, but that won't be of any help. Hmm, i don't really have comments on these pictures, except that you draw a bit too soft at some points. Try to put a little accent on the outer lines. The Monster-taxi picture is a good example: Great anatomy and drawing on the 'monster', but it is all a bit too soft. Maybe it's just your way of drawing, maybe it's just the quality of the image/your scanner. Anyway, maybe i'm completely wrong, but it's worth paying some attention to.

cheers m8

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