Character_elf~girl____WIP

[Reo]

okay a screen cap for you guys and girls......




http://www.cdis.org/~gverhage/girl_002.jpg

[Reo]

more....more..more


http://www.cdis.org/~gverhage/girl_003.jpg

[Beholder]

Where are the dimples in her lower back?

I feel I would be jumping the gun if I commented without knowing what her story. Tell us this lady's story.

Also, show us some more level shots.

[ansiaaa]

how is she going? i'm curious to see some news :)

[Maximus Groff]

upgrade plz! :wip: going good...

not too crazy bout the 2nd pic however :hmm:

[Joril]

Character_elf~girl

Looks pretty human to me.
:p

Quite a good start!
Keep it up and have fun!

[meheekano]

the dude just gots to put them wicked pointy ears and its an instant elf, man

[Reo]

http://www.cdis.org/~gverhage/girl_005.jpg

[MDB101]

Sweet model man :) I love how you did her cloths :) what prog are you using? anyhow man yes keep this up :)

[Reo]

last one for today I think





http://www.cdis.org/~gverhage/girl_006.jpg

[blindsleeper]

beautiful work so far... i look forward to more

[Spirit2029]

Wagga wagga, looking interesting buds. The torso looks a little long to me, but I rember you were saying that she was going to be a little whispy.. Something still throwin me in the face, still to masculain I think..in the brows..try to soften a little. I want to see way way more stitching, and when you go to rig..texture the pieces all seperate first, then merge the halfes, and the stitching all together with no bleeding, textures will stick!!, and then its easy to weight. laters...

Spirit2029

Bitch!!

[Joel Snider]

crit coming: the breasts look a little odd

particularly at the base of the breast . . .they seem cubicular . . .and not as round as they should be

nice work so far keep going :wip: :wip:

[Reo]

okay every one thanks for the coments........

and yes the breasts do look a bit off....cuz I was trying to get the heavy leather to look right......I'll see what I can do...


chris.......I know about the brow........it's getting worked on....:p

[Reo]

okay she has some temp...hair .....


http://www.cdis.org/~gverhage/girl_007.jpg

[S_3D_A]

You sure this is an elf girl. This thing is freaking me out. But hey I like it. Really wicked.:)

[SPIDER2544]

well maybe when its textured it will look more girl like

but other than that i really dig the design

[Reo]

yah she does'nt look all that girl like because I wanted my elves to look a bit more androgenous.....so she does look a bit male ....but the texture maps will change alot ....






http://www.cdis.org/~gverhage/girl_008.jpg

[heymike]

Looking Good ... :buttrock:

[Reo]

okay here's a whole new head for this girl.....some people where saying she looked like a boy ...so I scraped the one one.....

http://www.cdis.org/~gverhage/girl_009.jpg

http://www.cdis.org/~gverhage/girl_010.jpg

I'll be back with more

[Reo]

http://www.cdis.org/~gverhage/girl_011.jpg

[nickRX]

looks more girly now, but i think you need to fix the boobs up a bit...

[Gremlin]

that looks so ****ing good
oh my ****ing god!
jesus, keep up that ****ing astounding work, jeeezuz!
Cheers,
:beer:

but damn, that just looks soo good!!!

[MadS]

Wow, she's looking awesome. The new head is cooler, than the previous Romulan-look. She looks more interesting bald.

I know it's been said many times, but those breasts do look funky. Looks like she tried to stuff her bra with coasters or something. :)

You definitely have a style in your work, which is something I think all great artists try acheive.
So, are you making a short film with all these characters you are making?

[dominicqwek]

this is absolutely beautiful. i like the way her physique is formed. the slanky look and all. keep it up!!:buttrock:

[Spirit2029]

looking slick man...lets see the hair again..

[Reo]

look mom a new rack!!!!


http://www.cdis.org/~gverhage/girl_013.jpg

[Reo]

new hair for the new head



http://www.cdis.org/~gverhage/girl_014.jpg

[Hellwolve]

Originally posted by bRoKEn_CycLE
look mom a new rack!!!!

Although they look better, they still need fixing IMHO :p

[Reo]

http://www.cdis.org/~gverhage/girl_015.jpg

[Reo]

http://www.cdis.org/~gverhage/girl_016.jpg

[MadS]

Looking cool. I still think she looks better bald. And the boobies sill look funny, imho. Something else bothering me is her shoulders. They don't look like the are bending properly, or they simply aren't long enough. The shoulders seem too small... everything else looks pefect. Looks like you plan to give her a ponytail.:thumbsup:

[insanepoly]

Wow, cool design, I like it very much. But the boobs seems kinda saggy to me. If you are going for the androgynous look, I would suggest making them smaller but perkier. Somehow the boobs just doesn't seem to go with the face or body.

[MDB101]

Exellent Imagination you have there :) and a well put model :) as for the boobies.. I would agree with others. she is young looking so I would expect more of a refreasher boobs :) But if your gunna go for an OLD elf I would just leave em the way they are :)

Keep it up!

[Reo]

thanks again every one I do really take the crits seriously...... the breasts are a bit saggy....but thats because I followed my ref images and I found them to be more natural this way.....but I'll try a new verson for you........see if it works out better....

there is still lots more work to go so I'll get back to it...

thanks again

[MadS]

Mind if I see the ref image?

[Wizzard]

your modeling is really amazing! let me see the wireframe
keep workin' man
:buttrock: :buttrock: :buttrock:

[MDB101]

I just thought of somethin.. Before you texture the clothing! will it be leather? if so go here and download some of these good leather textures! hehe 1200x1200 rez or higher man! do iT!

http://www.imageafter.com/category.php?category=leather_skin

[p0lym0rph]

verry cool,great modeling :thumbsup:

[Smoke_DT]

Great modeling, the idea is good also. The only thing is: Make her bigger tits :bounce: :bounce: Make her to give more sexual feeling. :airguitar:

[Carina]

No, please don't give her bigger tits.

Just pert them up a bit.. I agree they look a slight bit saggy and out of place now, but I would really prefer to see a model that didn't have huge baloobas for once!

I prefer her bald or with long hair.. I think the shorter hair makes her look like a man...

Anyway, I think it's an excellent model, nice and original, looking forward to updates! :thumbsup:

[Smoke_DT]

I'm not talking about "huge baloobas" :shame: ... it's just look like there are tennisballs under her dress. :D
I agree with the long hair stye :thumbsup:

[monkeysweat]

Well I think the breasts are just right for this character. I know we all wish the ladies had perfect jubblies, but it just ain't so my friends. The modelling is very nice so please post some wires. I especially like the outfit. Did you come up with that yourself? Cant' wait to her done:thumbsup:

[Chabee]

Hey! Cool complet model and skin dress very good! :thumbsup:

[Lordrych]

OK i have been reading this thread from the beginning and never said anything but i have to now. I think the tits are just fine, don't perk them just round them off a bit on the bottom, even though they are saggy they should still be round. A little widder and you get the look everyone is talking about. Anyway the exotic look you are going for is awesome and the boobs fit totally with it. people are so used to fake huge jugs that they don't think anyone is normal unless they have perky huge boobs.


Rych

[Hellwolve]

Originally posted by Lordrych
<SNIP>people are so used to fake huge jugs that they don't think anyone is normal unless they have perky huge boobs.

We ain't talking 'bout huge. We just want perky :D

So there :p

;)

[Reo]

http://www.cdis.org/~gverhage/girl_017.jpg

http://www.cdis.org/~gverhage/girl_018.jpg

http://www.cdis.org/~gverhage/girl_019.jpg



and here these boobs are new????


http://www.cdis.org/~gverhage/girl_020.jpg

[Reo]

mdb101 thanks alot guy thats great ....really great ..they will go well with the photos I took of my leather jacket......

okay so the head dress thing is out ...I'm going with a bald head......

the new shirt has alotttttt of work left in it so bare with me....

more to come ....

[Reo]

I just thought I'd throw up the conscept images I did a while ago....


http://www.cdis.org/~gverhage/elf.jpg

[goodlag]

wow coool~~
very nice mesh with clean geometry
amazing stuff.:thumbsup:

[Chabee]

Cool conscept pictures!!! :thumbsup:

[Hellwolve]

Ah, the new boobs look perfect :beer:

Keep it up :thumbsup:

[FLOw]

excellent :D

[Reo]

hey thanks again all.......so I'm going to be adding alot of new stuff to her over the next day or two ......so I'll post soon

[RedSilas]

This is looking great! I have enjoyed watching the progress. I can't wait to see it textured! :applause:

[phyle]

Wow awesome,
The model has improved so much over the course of this thread!
the boobs are perfect now
Its great the way it is, but if i was going to say anything id say have a look at the shoulders. The deltoid muscles should run a bit lower down the arm, have a look at some ref pictures and youll see what i mean.

Apart from that it is an awesome model!

[Teyon]

I'd have to agree, the shoulders are both too small and placed too high. Otherwise, this is flawless. Inspiring to say the least.

Edit:

The goggles in the concept seem a bit out of place for some reason...I don't think she'd have them but if it's what you want, go for it.

[BadKarma]

rahhh man ive been checking out ur work is ****ing great - have u done any commerical things?

ur characters are ****in great u have one of them very good things and "unique imagination" i love it fella.

BadKarma

[cgjie]

Wow cool girl!
Great work you are doing.
I am looking forward to enjoying more about her:drool:
:beer:

[liquid_tension]

Wow man I just checked the rest of your models i think its simply impresive, you know what? I think that If you ever have a chance and desire to show how you work your should write a little modelling tutorial cuz definitly your modelling skills are great. take care and keep going!!! :applause:

[shmegegge]

Dammit, I wish I'd caught this thread earlier so that I could have chimed in on time. DON'T CHANGE THE BREASTS!!! too late. oh well. I'm sick of these Anime rocket tits that every drooling tech head loves to model. Everything about their models is so photo-real except the women always have unimaginably buoyant tits. Real breasts look like your model's did after you fixed that weird lumpiness it first had. They sag, dammit! Next time someone tells you that breasts you modeled need more perk, tell them you're not making a porno mag, dammit! Otherwise, your model is outstanding. Great work!

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