still: hollyday with scubadive

[JasperCG]

Good start. Like you said, you need work on the textures. Couple of areas I noticed:

1. The "bench" seems to clean. It looks obviously mapped - chromic map.
2. Definitely add dirt and scratches. Right now your colors pop out. If you are going for cartoony it works, but realism is a lot more muted.
3. The water seems to blue as well. Maybe darken it up a little. It looks like it is in a swimming pool
4. maybe drops of water in the bottom of the boat and near the scuba equipment.

I like the "chaos' of the way things are laying around.

Nice start. I look forward to seeing more.

[smoke]

I really like it so far. The models, lighting and textures are great.
You listed alot of that you are adding, you want to leave out afew things or it start to get to cluttered. I think the composition is great as it is.

[iladi]

Thanks for the feedback.
Finaly managed how to insert bigger images, so I can post the picture directly here.

I know the colors pop out, this is supposed to be with the scuba gear. But u are right regarding the boat, I think I can desaturate a little.

[iladi]

here is just the water. does it realy looks like a pool?

[JasperCG]

Just my opinion - but try a little darker blue maybe??

[ndat]

The water has a very nice bump and specular, it looks very realistic... but I suppose I see where they are coming from, althought there are very clean areas that look similar to that.

[iladi]

some improvementes, I hope. please, feel free to c&c.

http://www.interactiv.rdsor.ro/pictures/holly3.jpg

[bigB]

Looks good so far....

but I am a diver myself, how is someone supposed to put the air tank on?? :rolleyes:

:thumbsup:

[JasperCG]

It is looking a lot better. The dirty textures added a lot. I agree with BigB... the tank needs all the vest apparati and straps that go with it.

Also.. a nice realism touch would be water in the bottom of the boat.

The water looks much better... the darker portions give a more natural feel.

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