WIP.SIMPLE STREET...Your opinion please

[LstDROPzz]

Hi again!
I haven`t enough time for my work...And it is small update....
Can you say anything about perspective,ligt,shadows?
I guess there is some problems with perspective.... :hmm: Don`t know....

[CybrGfx]

I like this. A bit too empty in the center of your canvas, though. The tall building on the corner is nice, but then everything just drops away. The building on the left with the yellow sign is curving out into the street, and again, it looks empty behind it.

You need to draw out your streets first, and then place the buildings, so you don't have this problem. If you are not familiar with 2 point perspective lines from your horizon, there are LOTs of tutorials out there. Go study and practice.

This needs a sky. The sky is the biggest part of your background in this piece, and would help YOU immensely in painting the buidlings, and placing shadows, etc. Whenever you create something like this, think about your background, and paint it first, so that you have the atmosphere and mood to help you through the rest of the process...

It has strong potential, but your foundation is weak.
Get a solid horizon line/perspective grid going, and a sky, and after you correct your perspective and shadow issues, I think this will turn out really nice.

~Cyber

[LstDROPzz]

thanks a lot for your comments!!
I will work according with your advices.....

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